No problem :3 Also your writing is good, but if you could try to write a little more in your posts that would be great!
As Savina continued to sniff and nudge the young wolf she seemed to stir. Relief flooded her. Good, she wasn't beyond help, or at least didn't seem to be. Startling eyes of crimson were revealed to her and the young girl yawned. Had she only been sleeping? No, there was definitely something wrong with her, she could sense it in her scent. The slurred speech and soft whine confirmed that notion further. "It is okay," Savina said softly. When the pale girl rose to sit she thought that perhaps her injuries weren't so bad, but when she startled back and fell shaking to the ground the Commander winced, shoulders tensing. "Perhaps you should stay still, try not to move..." She was already about to call her daughter, the pack's medic, when the younger wolf made a shocking request.
Emeralds grew wide in the low light and she jerked her head back just in time to avoid the sharp claws. A growl threatened to rumble menacingly in her chest, her survival instincts heightened by motherhood rising up in her. However her mind wrestled that response back for the moment. The poor thing was hurt and scared, that was why she had said and done such things. "I can help you, my daughter is a healer. Please, let us help you." Her eyes were soft as she looked to the poor creature before her. Who would have done something to hurt someone so young?
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