Looks fine to me!
You know what they say: If you wish a bear wouldn't come your way, you might as well expect one under your nose. Okay, well, that isn't really a saying, but that's exactly what happened. Malachi didn't truly notice when the grass left her feet and was replaced by gravel, but when she did she was taken aback. Her big body rolled to the left as she looked around her, and finding herself a little disoriented. The smells were, needless to say, a little awful, and Mala immediately wished she were near her home again. Wherever that was.
Some sounds of distress uttered from her lightly-colored muzzle, finding herself a little scared as she looked ahead onto an ancient city. She couldn't turn back... she didn't even know where 'back' was! Her head craned up to look at the tall buildings in the horizon, and she fidgeted as she tried to get a good feel of the old road underneath her. Mala inhaled deeply to soothe herself, though it didn't help with the musty air filling her senses. Snorting, she decided it best to just keep her head down low and keep on walking. Maybe if she closed her eyes, the city would just disappear.
But it didn't. In fact, when she opened her eyes and looked up again after a few silent minutes, it seemed like she was only at the borders of the city. Mala sighed greatly with disappointment. Not only was she alone, but alone in a giant, creepy, dark, empty city. Her giant body let go of all tension as she plopped herself onto the ground, a large THUD shaking the ground and loose dust stirring about her. She didn't care, though, all that crossed her mind was how she was going to get out of this wretched place.
