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Axelle watched the weird brute play with his sword for a few minutes. He seemed to be really into it, so she sat quietly. She would get into conversation with him if it had to take all damn day. He licked the sword with his tongue, and she wondered if it had cut him. Then when he was finished, he sheathed the sword in its holder and looked up at her. It’s sharp, too.
I bet.
Her words were kind of sarcastic and uncaring. She wasn’t threatened by this wolf, even though she should’ve been. She looked down at the ground and shifted into her Secui form. During, she looked up and noticed him thinking. What is he thinking about? She was pretty sure this was Alaki, but she always wasn’t a hundred percent sure either. His next statement confused her even more. Him? Second person.
Even if this wasn’t the male she was looking for, she wouldn’t totally let him in on why she was looking for Alaki. She looked at him suspiciously. J’adore did tell her he was a manipulative son of a bitch, but she wasn’t too sure of herself now.
He had hurt one of my close relatives.
She lied. She hoped it was a good enough lie. She wasn’t here for revenge, but maybe this would entice him to show himself and hope to injure her. Or something. She dropped the suspicious look, and turned it to a fake curious one now. She would play along, why not?
...And who are you, sir?
Politeness was always a virtue.
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