Slight PP again with pulling her out hope that's ok.
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Saxif’s body hit the water with an impressive splash but she was quick to discover that her swimming in this form was beyond rusty. To her fast paced mind she felt like she was moving like a snail. She just hoped that the water would deter the felines from following her. The last way she wanted to die was at the claws of an overgrown cat. Her heart pumped with excitement and fear balled into one when she heard the yell of another behind her. She glanced back at the female but that is when she gained the first sight of the large cougar that had skidded into the water behind the girl and her paws started to kick harder.
When the female first pushed her she couldn’t help but to snap back at her with a growl as the cougar was on her mind. She was relieved to discover the help and started to paw at the other edge. She tried to grip the ice that was forming on the other side but her claws would just slide through the slush-layered top until it cracked beneath her her paw. This forced her under the water for a brief moment before she gave another attempt with a wet huff of her nose. She wondered what the female had done to piss of the cougar so badly. With another urge to keep trying from the stranger she finally sunk a few nails into the thicker ice at the bank. With a grunt and heave she pulled her water heavy form to the shore, she turned to help the other secui but she had gone under.
Saxif growled at the cougar batting at it to stay in the water before she tested the ice on the edge. Her golden eyes searched feverishly for the girl and though it was brief seconds before her limbs became apparent Saxif had feared the worst. She leaned her head out as far as she could her eyes ever watchful of the water frenzied feline that was desperately trying to get out of the brisk river. She managed to grab the scruff of the female but her paw slipped narrowly throwing her balanced as she pulled. Her hind claws luckily stay firm in the freezing mud as she carefully pulled her ashore.
Help me! She barked when she approached the edge where the cat had just gained grip of the ice. She started to jump on her forelegs muttering hopes for the ice to break. She had hoped the water would have given her a head start so this was plan B. She pounded harder as the cat started to growl in that nauseating manner that Saxif hated so she growled back fiercely. This had caused the cat to hiss and bat at the girl just as she was rising for another attempt to break the ice. She pulled up higher to dodge the attack thus gave her the chance to come down with great force. The ice cracked from the bank and the cougar’s weight tipped it back. It had attempted to jump but its hind legs slid forcing the cat back in the water. Saxif laughed and looked to the coy-wolf. Run! The huntress bounded off swiftly her tongue lolled out from the excitement of the flee.
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