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[html]Hey all, i've just joined Smile

I've never RPG'ed before and so this is a first for me and i'm extreamly nervous and dying to get out there but i don't want to make any (or atleast too many) mistakes. Hrmm, i've read all the rules and resources i could find. The RP Guide was especially helpful!



Okay, now to my main point: I'm terrified to start :')



I've thought about alot of things and started developing a character, i've tried to keep him simple with very little to his past but at the same time i wanted to incorporate aspects of my own personality and such things to make him easier to play if that makes sense?


So what i'm asking for firstly is, if my character is okay? Appearance and personality are on my profile already Smile I'm also abit worried about my spelling and grammer as i'm aware i'm not particularly good :/

If there's anything in my character people think can be improved or is not allowed please point out x


Secondly, i'm incredibly stuck on pack and territories, no idea what's what and what would be best for me.


And last, joining. I've read over how to do so but am still confused. Sorry to be a pain :/

Anyways, this is what i've got so far:



Name: Alaki (Nickname: Key)

Gender: Male

Age: 1 year

Birthdate: December 20, 2009

Relations: All Deceased

Adopted Father: Jay (Deceased ?/ -yet to decide on best realistic dates-)

Luperci: Yes



---Where there is *** means i'm stuck on a location---



Bio: Born December 20th, 2009, Alaik has a common and often told past; Key has lost all of his family from when he was incredibly young. All that Key can remember of his time with his family is small glimpses of the attack; a voice telling him to "escape", to "get away" and he won't, he refuses to move, he will not leave them! Yet despite his resolve something grabs him by his scruff, draggin him away, his fur turn red as he is dragged through a pool of blood next to the remains of a white wolf.



The one whom saved him from the attack was a slightly older wolf called Jay. Aside from Jay and Alaki the rest of the pack was killed off, Jay refused to speak about the incident and the pack to protect Key from a possible traumatic past and so key grew up never knowing anything about his home and family. This is also the reason that Alaki has no last name.



Through his childhood Key depeanded completely on Jay and Jay raised him as his own; teaching him everything he could in the short time they spent together. Over time Key became adept at hunting and surviving, constantly playing pranks on Jay and full of semingly endless energy.



Jay was small for a Gray Wolf but Key admired him for his cunning and quick thinking; which was what kept the two alive for the most part. Unlike Key's darker colour Jay was a light grey wolf with a compact body, his ears slightly deformed from past fights; Key imagined Jay fiercly fighting of emey's three times his size bravely and without hesitation. His personality was quiet but observant, he had endless patience and was tolerant of Key's constant pranks, sometimes even encouraging them if he saw them as beneficial . . in some way or another.



The two travelled a great distance together and their last moments together were spent in **** where Jay unexpectanly died of an unkown course. It had been clear for awhile that something was not right with Jay; he was losing weight and was extreamly under weight, despite this he would often skip meals, regardless whether there was plenty off food, alongside his loss of appitite he was often lathargic and slept an un-natural ammount.



After Jay's death Alaki closed in on himself, he didn't want to face the pain of loosing Jay, it hurt to much. He started ignoring reality and everything around him.



But, not wanting to waste away the life Jay had saved, Key tried to make it on his own and so settled down in **** for awhile. Yet something was always missing, a jig-saw missing a piece, his life was never 'right' and so he set of to find a pack, hoping that within a pack he can find himself again. After a few days of walking he came across a small pack that accepted him in and so he tried to settle in. He acted the fool and the other younger wolves loved his act, adored him making a fool of himself but they never loved him. He was an outsider and never truly accepted into the pack. And so he left on his own again, spending his time up to now constantly on the move on his own.



He has currently stumbled into **** territory. skittering around the edges whilst having an internal debate whether to enter and try to belong in a pack once more or to continue on his way. . .
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