Holy cow! I replied, yay 
Sorry it's so short tho 
The chocolate female drew in a breath of cool air and blinked away tears that threatened to fall. Her eyes following the little boat as it sliced through the water. Soon it would be out of sight of the small group of three. She was a little sad that there were only three of them, though she half liked the privacy it gave them. Who would remember Noir after they were gone? Just like the boat her memory would sail off from everyone's minds until no one remembered her at all. Noir deserved to be remembered. Not just because of her death, but for her life, she had been the most innocent and caring person she had ever known.
She turned from the boat to look at the other two, her eyes suddenly bright with an idea. "We should build something for her," she began, suddenly feeling a bit foolish about the way she blurted that out. She watched for a reaction from their Leader and from her brother. She was sure Claudius would like to do something for Noir, and of course he was a craftsman. But Dawali she was unsure about, it was not in their tradition to leave monuments for the dead, that she knew of anyway. "I mean, with your blessing Dawali..."
She watched her brother carefully. She loved him dearly and hoped that he would agree with her idea. Maybe this would help them deal with the loss of their sister.
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