07-15-2009, 07:00 PM
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I don't want to post my character's profile until I have got everything nailed. And now I've got the history done, and I'm quite proud of it. But I'm still uncertain. I seem to have trouble grasping the concept of luperci and such. I usually prefer to stress a more detailed history, since it can give others a much better idea of the character they are dealing with, rather than a personality description. ^^
So, if someone, or several people, review my history for Corren and just drop off some notes? C: I'd like to know what I could do to help expand. *pokes lookup*
And obviously, the rest of the profile is not finished. ^^ Please set that aside when looking this over.
I don't want to post my character's profile until I have got everything nailed. And now I've got the history done, and I'm quite proud of it. But I'm still uncertain. I seem to have trouble grasping the concept of luperci and such. I usually prefer to stress a more detailed history, since it can give others a much better idea of the character they are dealing with, rather than a personality description. ^^
So, if someone, or several people, review my history for Corren and just drop off some notes? C: I'd like to know what I could do to help expand. *pokes lookup*
And obviously, the rest of the profile is not finished. ^^ Please set that aside when looking this over.