01-08-2010, 04:23 PM
Sounds awesome to me. 
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After finding himself in a strange territory and meeting a very strange wolf — who said he could live there for a bit!!! How awesome!!! — Myrtle had decided to try and find Bastien. Somehow in their trek to find some food, the two brothers had gotten separated. Myrtle had ended up in the northwestern pack lands of Dahlia de Mai; however, he had no idea where Sébastien had run off to! Myrtle decided to return to where they had last seen one another: a creepy forest full of spiders! Myrtle had not liked it at all, which was one of the reasons he had decided to try and find some food somewhere else. Of course, he had gotten himself horribly lost, as he was no good at doing anything without Sébastien at his side. He was pretty useless without his brother — but still more useful than his father — which was why they had stuck together for so long. And, of course, because Sébastien was Myrtle's bestest friend in the whole wide world!
Myrtle stopped suddenly when he heard his name called. He stood frozen, flicking his ears in every direction, trying to discern his brother's location. He let out a loud howl in reply, an awkward long-drawn out coyote yip that eventually turned into a lot of excited yips and half-howls. Myrtle excitedly set off in the direction he thought Sébastien was, shouting for his brother all the while.
"SÉBASTIEN! OÙ ES-TU? JE NE TE TROUVE PAS!" Myrtle's voice revealed the desperation he hopelessly felt. He wanted to find his brother, and he wanted to find him now!
Myrtle stopped suddenly when he heard his name called. He stood frozen, flicking his ears in every direction, trying to discern his brother's location. He let out a loud howl in reply, an awkward long-drawn out coyote yip that eventually turned into a lot of excited yips and half-howls. Myrtle excitedly set off in the direction he thought Sébastien was, shouting for his brother all the while.
"SÉBASTIEN! OÙ ES-TU? JE NE TE TROUVE PAS!" Myrtle's voice revealed the desperation he hopelessly felt. He wanted to find his brother, and he wanted to find him now!
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