Hello! Welcome to 'Souls! Did you have a profession path in mind for Shiloh? Also, there wouldn't be a sign marking the territory, just the fence and the scent markings ^^

The Gadui Kanati sat easily on the stallion's back as they cantered around the edge of AniWaya's territory. Things were slowly improving in the tribe, but the large improvements still had to wait until spring came and the ground cleared of snow. No huts could be safely and sturdily rebuilt until they could actually build on the ground. The Town Hall was slightly crowded and honestly the man was growing sick of having to live in the same building as so many other members of the tribe. He and Liliana had only been mates for a short time before the storm hit. This time should be their own to start their lives together and now they barely got any privacy whatsoever. Nayati's nerves were worn close to the surface these days and it did not take much for him to become irritated and foul tempered. He needed a break, some time away, just him and Lili. A plan was beginning to formulate, but it would have to wait a little longer yet.

His keen hunter's nose picked up on the scent of an unknown wolf and soon he spotted the collapsed form outside of the fenced line of the borders. Concern etched itself on his strong face and he signaled Iye to a halt and he got down from the horse's back. Nayati ducked under the fence and cautiously approached the malnourished woman. "Miss? Miss can you hear me? Are you alright?" The last question was slightly stupid, as she clearly was not alright, but it was simple instinct to ask it.

You might be interested in the Gatlvska rank then? You can check website if you want to look further This post of yours was a little short, we try to aim for at least 200 words a post. If you're having trouble thinking how to make it longer, you can describe the scenery or what Shiloh's thinking and feeling. The RP Guide has a good little section on post length ^^ Also, be careful not to describe other character's actions unless they've been stated in the post by their player. I didn't say Nayati was touching Shiloh, so your response had a little bit of powerplay. Just something to keep an eye on! I am going to have Nayati put her on his horse though so they can move from the borders, if you want me to change that though please do let me know!

The woman appeared to be in very desperate shape and Nayati was nothing of a healer. He knew very simple, basic sorts of first aid, but nothing extensive and surely not anything that would really help this unknown female. The smile she gave him was a good sign at least, and her words were coherent even if they were strained. Her hand reached for his face and instinctively the man pulled his head back. Nayati was not one for physical contact with those he was not close with and that sort of touch was far too familiar for his liking. The only woman who should be gently laying her hands on his face was his mother, his sister, and his mate and this woman was none of of those. He did not become angry though, simply avoiding her seeking hand.

"I am not a healer, though I can take you to one." At least he hoped that Dawali would be able to help the woman with his broken leg. The hunter knew that the injury hindered the Kalona greatly. She spoke more and her words were desperate and so the truth of her pledges could not be completely relied upon in this moment, but one thing was for certain though, "I will not let you die." Though whether or not she heard him before she slipped into unconsciousness again he did not know. He knew he had to pick her up and move her, even though he felt awkward about it, so his strong arms picked up her fragile from and carefully laid her over Iye's back. Nayati then began to lead the stallion slowly in the direction of the village and the Town Hall.

This is much better! You wrote 249 words this time. You can use this site to count the words that you have written instead of just the characters Also, I'm going to go ahead and get you accepted even though we're not finished yet. I'll PM Marit (Dawali's player) and see if she can either jump in to have him heal Shiloh or just have that OOCly be assumed. I'm going to be scarce for the next few days and then absent for a week, so I might not be able to reply to this thread again for a bit, but you'll be able to start other threads ^^

It was a little unnerving, having the unknown woman's body resting against his back as they rode towards the village. Of course his intentions were purely innocent and he only wished to get the female to Dawali for help, but if one of his fellow tribesmembers saw him it could easily be seen as inappropriate and construed in the wrong way. What if Liliana saw him with some unconscious woman behind him on his horse? He had had his own jealous outburst just a few days back and it would certainly be embarrassing to be caught by his mate in this position that could easily been viewed as compromising to his loyalty. Nayati hoped that Liliana would not think that he would ever be unfaithful to her, for that had not been his assumption when he had found her with the loner male. His anger had been purely targeted at the man, not at his mate. Regardless, the Gadui Kanati just wanted to get her to the village so she could get help and he could be out of this awkward situation.

Once they reached the Town Hall, Nayati dismounted and carefully gathered the ill woman up in his arms, carrying towards the entrance of the hall. She made some noise that might have been some sort of thanks, but he could not be certain, and she was once again asleep. Pale blue gaze looked forward and hoped dearly that the Kalona was in the Town Hall and able to help. "Dawali?" he called out. "I found a woman at the borders, she needs help." The man waited with baited breath for a response.