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04.08.12 . 1pm . amherst . optime form



Teme Lupus is by Alaine!

The young Stormbringer couldn't help his wandering now. He'd gotten away with it a good few times now without consequences and in his young mind, that meant he was going to be doing this a whole lot more often. It wasn't like he was getting bored of his home- he still managed to find joy in exploring the grounds, Elias at his side. But there was something about the unknown outside the borders, the lack of rules that meant he was free. He knew his father didn't quite approve, but there seemed to be an unspoken barrier set up between the pair since Temeraire's flight from home. It wasn't a problem, but Tem living on his own was certainly wedging something between the two Stormbringer males. Perhaps it was because he was no longer under his fathers constant watch, but their relationship was changing, perhaps morphing into something different entirely.


After waking late as usual, Temeraire had rolled out of his bed and onto the floor. Stretching in his optime form was a concept he hadn't quite figured out, and therefore reverted back to the lupus way of doing things. He was too lazy to actually shift though and therefore looked strange doing so. On his hands and knees, the boy had stretched out and yawned before standing and making his way into the open living area to grab some dried meat that Miskunn seemed intent on feeding him on for the rest of his life. He had handfuls of the stuff, hidden in convenient nooks and crannies around his house- he wasn't entirely sure why Miskunn was hiding the food she was giving him, but he wasn't going to complain.


He headed towards Amherst today, a pair of shorts his only adornment. He'd been tempted to bring Helexia with him, but the filly had nearly kicked him when he'd suggested a sourjourn out of the packlands. He'd given the foal a chuckle and a rub of the head before heading out. The ruins of the city were just coming into clarity and the young male was certainly oblivious to his surroundings. A soft whistle, a tune Uncle Bran had taught him, danced from his lips as he scruffed his hair up and broke into a trot, hoping to find something in Amherst today.

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1,402 words! :O I kinda went all out on this one. Teme's in for one hell of a shock. 10+4


Niernan had decided to bring Bran on his patrol today, relishing the time that he an his brother had alone, giving both of them time to finally catch up. When they had been wandering in the wild and forced to spend each and every day together, they had been at each others throats. But now that they lived in a pack and their lives were taking different paths they hardly saw each other. Nier was often patrolling, helping with building, training Darcy or spending time with Grace. While Bran was usually patrolling at different times, pursuing his carpentry or partaking in little projects all around Vinattas lands. It was only when both men led alone in their beds that they ever realised it had been such a long time that they had seen each other, or even spoken more than a greeting to each other. The last time they had spent much time together had been Eclipse's feast. Bran was far too manly to ever admit that he missed his brother, but Niernan had taken care of that, calling on the caramel furred man the day before and revealing how he felt and how he desired time with his brother. It was a reassurance to Niernan that his brother felt the same when Bran had practically leaped at the chance to spend time with him.

So now they were patrolling, walking side by side, playing and teasing each other like they had always done. Nier was aware that those in the pack that didn't quite know them as well as the core members saw them as fools, the hopeless, Irish idiots that were constantly playing, but Nier was ok with that, and Bran didn't care. They were both just happy that they could bring at least a little joy to the pack every now and then. A small period of comfortable silence had fallen between them but Nier could see the sideways glances and smirks that Bran was sending him. Finally he snapped, What Bran!? Just ask me. He half shouted, laughter lacing his words. His brother laughed as well, his heavier Irish accented tones revealing his thoughts, "Ah brother, you're hopeless against me! I was wondering when you were gonna tell me all about your lady friend and how in love you are." Nier gasped and looked playfully shocked, as if scandalised by Brans words. But how did you know, dear brother. We were keeping it a secret. He laughed, a besotted grin spreading across his muzzle, momentarily putting aside the play he stopped walking and looked at his brother, cyan eyes meeting sparkling mahogany. You remember back in the Solbjorg, when we were nought but pups and Ele was fascinated by love and all that? She kept asking Mam how she knew she was in love with Da, and Mam would say that she just knew. Well, He paused, shrugging his shoulders and sighing, With Grace, I just know, ya know? He asked. Bran smiled wryly and shook his head, "No brother, I don't know. But I'm more than glad you've found yourself a girl." Bran clapped him on the shoulder and they carried on walking, falling back into step with each other, the mood slightly less playful, but still upbeat. Bran shoulder bumped Niernan, sending the dark Stormbringer slightly off course, "I like her. She seems like she won't let ya get away with anything. Strong girl that one." He said, laughing as Niernan sighed and gave him a look, Aw brother, you're gonna tease me about being whipped all me life, aren't ya? The caramel man laughed loudly, throwing his head back and guffawing, affirming Niernans fears.

They had just reached the North-eastern border of the pack-lands and Bran had managed to reign in his mirth so that now he only giggled in small bursts, Nier was trying to look offended but couldn't help the smile that kept fighting its way onto his muzzle. His face suddenly fell as he scented something on the border that shouldn't be there. he stopped abruptly and followed the scent trail, his face full of dismay as he realised that the familiar smell crossed the border line and disappeared off into the neutral lands. Bran looked at his brother, concerned by his sudden change in mood. Nier sighed and looked back, Teme's been here. He's crossed the borders." Brans face became troubled then, realising what Niernan already had; their time together had been cut short. Nier had thought that he had taught his nephew the lesson he needed to know about the borders the day he had caught him greeting a stranger alone. It seemed the boy had forgotten that lesson in all the excitement of becoming an 'adult.' In all honesty the boy was just that; a boy. He thought himself grown up and able to protect himself because he could shift now, when they were young Bran and Niernan had felt exactly the same way, it was their Uncle Emeris that had taught them differently. Emeris had given them the scare of their lives, Nier had been half convinced that his large uncle was going to kill Bran when he had found them a mile outside the Solbjorg all alone with no weapons, his jaws had been around Brans throat and Niernan couldn't even move he was that scared. It was after that incident that Emeris taught them how to fight, Bran choosing the bo-staff and Niernan the skains.

There was no uncle Emeris to go out and teach Teme, so Nier figured it was up to him. Bran saw the resolve in his brothers face and nodded, "I'll go back to Jordheim, tell Saul where you've gone." He said, his voice now concrete and weary. Nier gave a small, weary smile, Thanks Bran. I'll be back soon. He said before turning away and bursting into a sprint, following the faint paw tracks that would inevitably lead him to his miscreant nephew. He looked up from his run, rolling his eyes as he noticed the general direction that the tracks were heading in; Amherst. It was natural for the boy to be curious and want to explore, but surely he could have asked someone to go with him. Surely he should know that it wasn't safe to venture out on his own, not after what happened to his step mother and Coli. the thought of Teme thinking that he was immune from harm and trouble only served to increase Niernans anger. He snarled as he slowed to a jog, his ears pricking as he caught the sound of a familiar tune on the wind, that was one of Brans favourite tunes, and Nier knew for a fact that his brother had taught it to Teme because he had been there.

Nier raised his nose to the air, the scent of his nephew was stronger here, he was getting close, but then so was the edge of Amherst. He didn't think he was going to catch up with the boy before he entered the old city. Nier thought quickly, knowing that he could stalk the boy easier through the city, using the buildings as cover, he would be more effective if he masked his scent. He scouted around frantically, looking for something strong enough to confuse Teme's nose. He found the mostly decomposed remains of a rabbit, recoiling at the stink of the fur scraps and bones, he hated the idea of disguising himself with that stench, but it would have to do. He plucked the largest scrap of fur he could find on the carcass and scraped off any meat left on it on the grass, rubbing the now dry pelt over his neck, wrists, ankles and the base of his tail, covering all of his scent glands. He discarded the pelt quickly, shuddering in disgust before ripping out handfuls of grass and smothering the rest of his body and shorts in the damaged ends, crushing the green stems against his fur to mask the rest of him. Once done he jogged towards Amherst, knowing that he'd have to scare the fur off the boy to make him think about what he was doing, he silently cursed himself for leaving his skains in his bag at his house, knowing that the addition of sharp weapons would only add to the fear and danger factor, for now his claws and teeth would have to do.


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Teme Lupus is by Alaine!

Walking along in a bubble of his own mind was something Temeraire never succumbed to, very unlike his father. Knowing Saul how Tem did, he knew that his father often became oblivious to the world around him, internalising completely until he was startled from his thoughts unexpectedly. The boy had always thought this a little reckless- it wouldn't do anyone any good to shut off and not have a clue what was going on around oneself. Instead, his blue eyes were clear and eager, taking everything in that was of even remotely interesting to him. He couldn't help exploring everything either, black nose twitching constantly to take in all the smells he possibly could. He hoped that his absence wouldn't be noticed, but reasoned he was only a half hour away from home if anything was noticed, he'd be within hearing distance of a summoning howl at least.


With his tail swishing behind him, Temeraire moved with little purpose through the broken pavements and streets. He touched a lot though, black hands running over the buildings, coming away covered in dust and dirt. It was all a new experience for him and he could contain the carefree chuckle no longer. He paused for a moment as a foul smell caught his nose and he cringed slightly, not realising the smell had come from behind him. Darting down a little alleyway, Temeraire found a broken door, the inside of a large building tantalising enough to make him stray from his path. Ducking inside, the boy stared at the huge open space and the abundance of things he knew nothing about, not even a guess as to what they might be. He supposed this was a human warehouse however and began digging through what was in front of him, not really understanding what any of it was.

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Words: 386. Urgh, this post is SHITE! Sorry chicky. 3 pts


It wasn't long before his nephews white tipped tail came into view, he narrowed his cerulean eyes and darted out of sight. The wind had changed as soon as he had spotted Teme and he was sure the boy had caught his repugnant scent on the breeze. He found himself hanging out in the doorway of an old human building, the sign above the door reading 'Barber'. He had no idea what a barber was, but the building was convenient for him to hide in, the large window out front filmed with dirt gave him a cloudy view of the younger Stormbringers movements. He crushed himself against the wall, glad for his dark colouring, ensuring that he blended in with shadows.

He started as Teme disappeared, dashing down an alleyway and out of sight. Nier moved swiftly through the barber shop, heading straight for the back room and the door that he luckily found their. He emerged into a tiny, dingy alleyway just as Teme passed the opening. The boy didn't seem to see him and he sighed in relief, glad his cover wasn't blown. He sidled out of the junction and proceeded to stalk the boy, his foot-paws making no noise on the paved floor, glad the the air was stagnant in the city and didn't carry the stench of him to the boy.

He watched as the tip of Teme's tail vanished into a large building, he stood outside the doors, listening to the rummaging that commenced. He was glad that Teme was curious and looking for things to take back or use, but he was still angry about the boy sneaking off to do it. He could have asked to go on an expedition, but it seemed the boy got more of a thrill from sneaking out. He decided that Teme had had enough time feeling safe and searching through the debris, he moved around to the doorway, as quietly as possible and stood there, watching the boy. He had hoped that Temeraire would feel his gaze, showing more of an awareness of his surroundings and maybe a sixth sense for these things, but he didn't.

Nier let out a menacing growl, forewarning the boy slightly before he leaped forward, teeth bared as he opened his maw as wide as possible, hand-paws flung forward and grasping.


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I dont even.... sorry? :/



Teme Lupus is by Alaine!

Black paws were excited and restless as he moved forward and into a more open space. He had no words for the objects he could see and for a brief moment wished he'd brought someone along even if it was Elias. He had no clue what his rusty friend knew about humans, but perhaps they could have made a game out of guessing what these things did. Instead, he was on his own as he tried his hardest to take everything in. Despite his many wanderings outside of Vinátta, he'd never really been confronted with this amount of foreign items before and in truth it was a little overwhelming. Picking up a heavy rounded object, he was surprised to see a straight bit coming off it and a coil of some sort. Confused, he placed it back on the pile it had been on, pupils still wide with excitement.


He felt the threatening growl just a few miliseconds before the sound reverberated through the warehouse. Fear rippled through the dark Stormbringers body at the sound and he was torn between turning and seeing who was there, perhaps trying to reason with them, or running. In the confusion of trying to decide whether to turn or to move, he remained frozen with his back turned. His muscles tensed as he felt teeth, claws and a body collide with him and yet he still couldn't move. He couldn't stop, however, the terrified whine that came from his lips, the only acknowledgement that anything was happening to him.

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Ugh. *headdesk* words: 272


Niernan flew through the air easily, it was a strange feeling, soaring towards someone blood related to him. he had thrown himself at family members before, mainly Bran, but that was always in play, this time he was actually flinging himself at family with intent. These thoughts took only milliseconds to process, because within a moment he was crashing into the black furred boy, his arms wrapping around the others body, claws grasping but not puncturing, teeth scraping but not drawing blood. The two of them crashed to the filthy warehouse floor, Niernans heavy body on top of Teme's slightly smaller frame.

Nier was shocked that the boy hadn't reacted, it looked to him like the boy had completely frozen, cementing it in Niers mind that Teme needed to be taught how to defend himself. he heard the boy whine and felt his resolve wavering, his desire to wrap the boy up in a hug and comfort him nearly over-riding his anger. the key word there was nearly because Nier dismissed the need to comfort the boy. He let a spine chilling growl rip from his throat, pressing his teeth against the back of the boys neck, the rest of his body pinning his nephew to the floor. he thought about playing the territorial wolf role, but he knew he wouldn't be able to disguise his voice as effectively as he disguised his scent, his Irish brogue always came through. He remained where he was, waiting for the boy to do something. he resolved that if Teme remained frozen he would flip the boy over, let him see he wasn't in true danger.


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I dont even.... sorry? :/



Teme Lupus is by Alaine!

Despite his frozen, prone form there was tension in the males body, the automatic and instinctive raising of his hackles and the tensing of muscles that would aid him in some kind of fight or flight reaction. It was just a shame neither reaction had kicked in and he was firmly stuck in the ambiguous 'fright' stage of what was once a straightforward response. The collision of another body with his own seemed to force a response from his however. No matter how terrified he was, his survival instinct was stronger. Trying to gauge why no blood had been spilt despite the obvious claws and teeth against his skin as they hit the floor was pushed to the back of his mind. The threatening growl that came from his attacker caused an answering snarl from his own lips, despite the teeth pressed to the back of his neck.


Instinct told him that he was in a better position that he'd originally thought- his belly was covered and tucking his head to the side caused his ruff to protect the rest of his more vulnerable neck. Despite his attacker clearly being heavier than him, he'd pinned him to the floor on his stomach, which in turn protected him automatically from having his vital organs ripped out. This fact gave the boy a little confidence, though he also recognised that there was very little he could do, pinned to the floor. He could survive however and that would be enough for now. A quick mind recognised that while his torso was pinned, his legs were blessedly free of weight. With another firm growl, Temeraire attempted to dig his footpaws under the legs of the other luperci and should he succeed, his attempt at shifting the heavier male by tugging his legs to the left would hopefully yield some results.

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194 words. Again, *headdesk*


Nier was about to grasp the boys by the arms and flip him over, his hand-paws already moving, when the boys footpaws swept his legs aside, sending him off balance. He could feel himself sliding away from the boys body, realising that he would relinquish control of the situation if he let it go any farther. He set his footpaws on the floor, digging his blunt claws into the stone and dust, trying to find purchase as he reached over the body of his nephew. His large hand-paw aiming for the nape of Teme's neck, he saw his mistake as he made it; he left a moment when he didn't have a hold on the boy at all. He had left himself wide open and a flicker of fear passed through him as he realised it. He hadn't missed Tem's growls and snarls, the noises had shown that the boy had instincts and now Nier had given him the opportunity to use them.

He waited for his nephews attack, ready to stop the dark boy in case the attack was too strong or wild, not wanting to earn himself a scar in a little scrap.


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OOC ending.

Niernan gets thrown off by Temeraire and they face each other. Tem is astounded by his uncles unprovoked attack and he asks him why. Niernan explains why Tem needs to be prepared for anything and that wandering around outside the borders without the protection of the pack or a knowledge of how to protect himself is stupid. He praises Tem on his natural fight instincts, even if the boy did initially freeze. They walk back to VN together where they separate because Niernan has to go and bathe to rid himself of stinky rabbit.


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