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    Thread: [m] And so we sailed away
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[html] Lorkan Word Count → 715 :: Sorry that this is a monster! I tried to trim it down. Emphasis on "tried." It was utter desperation that brought him there. On any other occasion, the ...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 1 430 7 June 2018, 01:09 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
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Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 6 June 2018, 01:08 PM
    Thread: developing writing style
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This is very helpful—thank you! I suppose it's a matter of balancing style, introspection, and your character's interaction with the world around them. I'll definitely try to utilize some of the tips...
Lorkan Blackmir Questions & Help 4 2,161 5 June 2018, 03:26 PM
    Thread: developing writing style
Post: developing writing style

I've only recently come back into roleplay; and lately I have been trying to "revamp" the way that I write to put a greater emphasis on coherence. I tend to add a lot of introspection and stylistic ...
Lorkan Blackmir Questions & Help 4 2,161 2 June 2018, 12:50 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
Post: Re: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode

The woman did not try to help steady him, though he thought she would have liked to. A small part of him even wished that she had, though the rest would fervently deny it. He felt the entire force of ...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 1 June 2018, 07:50 PM
    Thread: redwater
Post: Re: redwater

OOC: Hi! Sorry this took forever. :") They'd sought refuge in the ruin of an old cabin. It was damp and smelled of wood-rot, secluded off in a segment of forest under the shade of a distant peak. Cac...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 1 383 31 May 2018, 10:00 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
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The medic accepted his choice, which was a relief, because with each passing moment, Lorkan feared the fight was fleeing him. He still felt the pressure of her presence; it was knotted in the rigid co...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 29 May 2018, 06:22 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
Post: Re: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode

Lorkan grimaced as the elbow of the arm supporting him nearly buckled. He was almost tempted to take the woman up on her offer, but in the end his caution won out. Out here, it was just him and the el...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 13 May 2018, 02:04 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
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Her touch withdrew, but her presence did not. Lorkan froze completely, feeling as though his chest were in suspension—as though, if he were still enough, he could prevent that dreaded strike. This wa...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 6 May 2018, 07:03 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
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The spirit disappeared—faded to mist, though its presence still permeated the air. Lorkan stared blankly at the now-empty horizon, one hand still clutched to his side, the other pressed against the di...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 3 May 2018, 08:12 PM
    Thread: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode
Post: [m] to arrive is to wither and erode

[mwarn][/mwarn] OOC: Set somewhere inland of Cape Acadia. Edited for tag just to be safe. :) A spirit waited for him up ahead in the distance. Gauzy, smoke-edged, it beckoned him forward. He searched...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead phpBB 13 2,225 30 April 2018, 06:44 PM
    Thread: Joining
Post: Joining

Character Name: Lorkan Blackmir Character Birthdate: 20 Nov 2016 Gender: Male Species: Coy-Dog-Wolf Hybrid (50% dog, 37.5% coyote, 12.5% wolf) Is your character a Luperci?: Yes Other 'Souls Char...
Lorkan Blackmir Dead Joiners 1 404 27 April 2018, 10:36 PM