Hey there, Amanda! :3
I know you've received PMs and assistance from others thus far -- great! Your post looks mostly okay; there's just two things I wanted to address with you before I get you accepted:
The
first issue is a bit more important than the second. :3 In Kasume's profile description, you refer to her as having lime green fur. Natural fur color
must be realistic at 'Souls -- while we aren't extremely picky about fur patterns, we do expect coloration to remain natural. :3
The Fur section of the Appearance page over on the RP Guide might help you out here.
We
do allow for characters to have dyed and modified fur -- however, that requires a knowledge of dying plants, and also requires your character to be a Luperci! After all, hands would make it much easier to dye than paws. :3 In addition, Kasume is a darker-colored character -- consider making the areas you want to dye paler than her black fur, as it's easier for the color to show through and the color won't fade as quickly.
Can you just
fix this part of your character's profile up for me? You can: a) remove the mention of green fur; b) change that she is a Luperci and make her proficient in dying techniques; or c) some other alternative I haven't figured out -- if you have any ideas that seem plausible, feel free to ask about them!
If you need assistance in figuring anything out, please feel free to
Private Message me. I also have Yahoo! IM if that makes things easier for you, or you can hop onto our
chatroom.
When you've fixed this issue up, I will accept you!
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The
second issue is less important than the first. In your post, you use asterisks to indicate character thought. While that's technically okay, it's much cleaner and neater to use italics to display thought. You should also try to use bolded text to display character speech -- again, this just makes it a lot easier for others to read your posts! If you're not sure how you can do this, here's the BBcode for you:
Code:
[i]What was i thinkin....[/i] she thought to herself, then felt a grumble in her stomach. [i]Great...now im hungry...I cant hunt on my own....[/i] She contiuned to think to herself. She then sighed with disbelief. [b]"Might as well keep moving."[/b] She said to herself aloud.
That'll end up looking like this:
Quote:What was i thinkin.... she thought to herself, then felt a grumble in her stomach. Great...now im hungry...I cant hunt on my own.... She contiuned to think to herself. She then sighed with disbelief. "Might as well keep moving." She said to herself aloud.
I notice you also tried to use HTML line breaks (the
tag) in your original post, which I edited out. :3 HTML only works if you wrap your text in the doHTML code (without the asterisks): [*dohtml](HTML Code Here)[/*dohtml] HTML or BBcode is fine to work with -- whichever you're more comfortable with!
I would appreciate it if you edited your post to reflect this just to show you understand what the heck I'm talking about, but you don't have to if you know what I mean with these little fiddly codes. ^_^