03-13-2011, 12:39 AM
So I have been planning my second character for quite some time but I am yet to finish it so if any of you guy could help me pull it together I would really grateful =D
Name: Elena Ivanova
Nickname: Lune (she gives that name over her original one)
Age:3 years of age
Date of Birth: January 1st of 2007
Gender: Female
Species: Canis lupus communis ortus (Russian wolf)
Appearance: her fur is completely white. Right arm (sword arm, right part of her chest and whole back is plagued with tribal designs in silvery blue… which I must still decide :|). Body is protected with multiple pieces of brown leather armor, her upper arms, legs, shoulders and chest being the areas covered while her hips only carry long twin strips of navy fabric on both front and back. Her eyes are covered with a tattered bandage and is never removed, beneath lays a pair of colorless blind eyes, though they used to be lilac before they were blinded and when hit with the right light the color can still be seen. Her body and armor is normally covered up with a full body hooded black coat, only leaving the tip of her muzzle visible. On a belt made from the same leather as her armor she carries several knives but more importantly a pair of twin middle sized swords which are firmly kept vertically along her back. She is blind since birth but has a different way of seeing, having lost the sense she is able to create a map of the area while hearing and smelling (something like daredevil dude). She carries a burnt moon symbol on her face, only the points showing through the bandage.
Her hair is middle sized, light gray and kept on multible braids with little white beads.
Personality: she pretty much lacks one as she has been trained since youth to do so. She obeys orders without question and when finished she may just stand there doing nothing. But she would not follow orders of someone that hasn’t gained her respect and the nature of the action must be for the good, never for evil. She simply despites everything involved with evil and darkness, her mission on life being pretty much eliminating it from existence. Yet there are times where here stoic and almost robotic mask will fall, revealing the being she would have become if she wouldn’t had been kidnapped and trained against her will on her youth. She becomes a sweet girl with a love for running around and being around others, feeling loved and loving in return. Yet the times that this happens are extremely rare and will most likely be triggered only by someone she knows for a long time and trusts.
Biography: Elena was born in Moscow, Russia. Her parents loved her to the core as all her other sibling were born dead but they were unable to keep her ash she was taken from their dead arms as she reached the age of month and half by a religious group. This group stole children for their own uses but only ones that were white, of pure blood (of only one kind of wolf) and that where born on the first day of the year. Poor Elena was unlucky enough to fit on all the requirements and as a “bonus” she was a Luperci, fact that the group was actively looking for. Once she was taken her sight was taken by her captor by burning a tribal moon right into her face and melting her sight on the process.
She was then taken to the now ruined cathedral of Notre Dame on Paris. There she was trained on the ways of what they called “light warriors” done to serve justice and good in every way possible and only to obey someone that where to abide by the rules of the light (be good on small words). There she learnt to fight, learn to see without the use of her gone sight, the way of the Luperci but only focusing on the Optime form and never mentioning the other two. She was made to forget whatever Russian she had learnt from her now gone parents and instead take on French and English as her main language. On the process she lost her personality and individuality as she was thought that those things where useless while serving the light, but without them noticing her mind was keeping part of it protected as she had already saw what the other warriors had become, nothing but husks with no will and only there to serve, they had become more an object that a being.
When she reached the age of three years she finally found her door to freedom. She was to be taken to Nova Scotia as words had reached them of a large group of Luperci there and they were in need of new members as the numbers had been dwindling after a hard fight with some gang of wolves that had intruded upon the ancient building.
And so she was taken aboard a scavenged ship towards Nova Scotia. Along the trip she was taken care of almost as she had been some kind of very valuable object that couldn’t suffer any kind of damage, kept on the inside of the ship and almost all the ship’s resources where used on her. When they finally arrived the shore after weeks of travelling only three members of the crew where left out of the original twelve. As soon as the ship touched the shore Elena came out of her self-induced trance. Before they could do anything she bolted past them in a black and white flash, disappearing into nearby woods before they could even move. Thanks to her efforts in keeping some traits of her old personality she could see how atrocious was their task on this new world, and she didn’t want to take part on doing the same that happened to her so long ago.
And so she reached Souls, she was tired of being used as a tool than a being and she was more than ready to stop the surviving members from carrying on with their mission. So from that day she wanders alone with no actual destination and pretty much just observing, but deep inside a small spark of emotion shines bright on her heart.
Abilities:
- Advanced combat training
- Fast and agile on her feet
-Swordplay
-Hand to hand combat
- Sleath
-Fast reflexes
Lacks:
- Strength
- Judgment over actions (they are either good or bad, no moral grey)
- Again, personality
- Social skills
- Will
What I need to get done:
-Some triats of her personality
-Improvement on the boigraphy
-Her tattoo desing
-Better armor desing
-Something else?
Thanks and if you feel something is bad on here please do tell me so I can change it. Also everything may look a bit blargh but I kinda rushed it and was sleepy while writting it so if something is wierd again please tell me ^.^.
Name: Elena Ivanova
Nickname: Lune (she gives that name over her original one)
Age:3 years of age
Date of Birth: January 1st of 2007
Gender: Female
Species: Canis lupus communis ortus (Russian wolf)
Appearance: her fur is completely white. Right arm (sword arm, right part of her chest and whole back is plagued with tribal designs in silvery blue… which I must still decide :|). Body is protected with multiple pieces of brown leather armor, her upper arms, legs, shoulders and chest being the areas covered while her hips only carry long twin strips of navy fabric on both front and back. Her eyes are covered with a tattered bandage and is never removed, beneath lays a pair of colorless blind eyes, though they used to be lilac before they were blinded and when hit with the right light the color can still be seen. Her body and armor is normally covered up with a full body hooded black coat, only leaving the tip of her muzzle visible. On a belt made from the same leather as her armor she carries several knives but more importantly a pair of twin middle sized swords which are firmly kept vertically along her back. She is blind since birth but has a different way of seeing, having lost the sense she is able to create a map of the area while hearing and smelling (something like daredevil dude). She carries a burnt moon symbol on her face, only the points showing through the bandage.
Her hair is middle sized, light gray and kept on multible braids with little white beads.
Personality: she pretty much lacks one as she has been trained since youth to do so. She obeys orders without question and when finished she may just stand there doing nothing. But she would not follow orders of someone that hasn’t gained her respect and the nature of the action must be for the good, never for evil. She simply despites everything involved with evil and darkness, her mission on life being pretty much eliminating it from existence. Yet there are times where here stoic and almost robotic mask will fall, revealing the being she would have become if she wouldn’t had been kidnapped and trained against her will on her youth. She becomes a sweet girl with a love for running around and being around others, feeling loved and loving in return. Yet the times that this happens are extremely rare and will most likely be triggered only by someone she knows for a long time and trusts.
Biography: Elena was born in Moscow, Russia. Her parents loved her to the core as all her other sibling were born dead but they were unable to keep her ash she was taken from their dead arms as she reached the age of month and half by a religious group. This group stole children for their own uses but only ones that were white, of pure blood (of only one kind of wolf) and that where born on the first day of the year. Poor Elena was unlucky enough to fit on all the requirements and as a “bonus” she was a Luperci, fact that the group was actively looking for. Once she was taken her sight was taken by her captor by burning a tribal moon right into her face and melting her sight on the process.
She was then taken to the now ruined cathedral of Notre Dame on Paris. There she was trained on the ways of what they called “light warriors” done to serve justice and good in every way possible and only to obey someone that where to abide by the rules of the light (be good on small words). There she learnt to fight, learn to see without the use of her gone sight, the way of the Luperci but only focusing on the Optime form and never mentioning the other two. She was made to forget whatever Russian she had learnt from her now gone parents and instead take on French and English as her main language. On the process she lost her personality and individuality as she was thought that those things where useless while serving the light, but without them noticing her mind was keeping part of it protected as she had already saw what the other warriors had become, nothing but husks with no will and only there to serve, they had become more an object that a being.
When she reached the age of three years she finally found her door to freedom. She was to be taken to Nova Scotia as words had reached them of a large group of Luperci there and they were in need of new members as the numbers had been dwindling after a hard fight with some gang of wolves that had intruded upon the ancient building.
And so she was taken aboard a scavenged ship towards Nova Scotia. Along the trip she was taken care of almost as she had been some kind of very valuable object that couldn’t suffer any kind of damage, kept on the inside of the ship and almost all the ship’s resources where used on her. When they finally arrived the shore after weeks of travelling only three members of the crew where left out of the original twelve. As soon as the ship touched the shore Elena came out of her self-induced trance. Before they could do anything she bolted past them in a black and white flash, disappearing into nearby woods before they could even move. Thanks to her efforts in keeping some traits of her old personality she could see how atrocious was their task on this new world, and she didn’t want to take part on doing the same that happened to her so long ago.
And so she reached Souls, she was tired of being used as a tool than a being and she was more than ready to stop the surviving members from carrying on with their mission. So from that day she wanders alone with no actual destination and pretty much just observing, but deep inside a small spark of emotion shines bright on her heart.
Abilities:
- Advanced combat training
- Fast and agile on her feet
-Swordplay
-Hand to hand combat
- Sleath
-Fast reflexes
Lacks:
- Strength
- Judgment over actions (they are either good or bad, no moral grey)
- Again, personality
- Social skills
- Will
What I need to get done:
-Some triats of her personality
-Improvement on the boigraphy
-Her tattoo desing
-Better armor desing
-Something else?
Thanks and if you feel something is bad on here please do tell me so I can change it. Also everything may look a bit blargh but I kinda rushed it and was sleepy while writting it so if something is wierd again please tell me ^.^.