Active vs. passive voice
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Sunny, she already linked to a page that explained what it was...she knows WHAT the difference is. She's asking for tips on how she can write in active rather than passive, because she writes in passive naturally.

I...personally, cannot offer tips. I write in active naturally, and I can't write in anything that makes me write without it. >.> Or without opinion, really. Uh.

I guess you could try getting more into Barrett's head? Help you make him more...the subject...


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