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Neela felt rather apprehensive as she looked at the wolf, who wasn't responding to her greeting and instead was just staring at her. Just when she was about to try talking again the wolf darted forward, causing Neela to fall onto her haunches as she tried to scoot backwards but slipped in the snow.
Grynn's reaction was extremely loud and aggressive, though thankfully loud was all it progressed to, with the bird screeching angrily at what she saw as an attack but staying firmly entrenched on Neela's back.
Neela however had, after a few seconds of staring blankly at the retreating wolf, processed the wolfs words. Part of her idly wondered ad Grynn's behaviour as the bird could well understand high speech, but guessed that the falcon had just randomly taken a disliking to the wolf, which wasn't particularly unusual for the temperamental falcon.
Neela's mind was taken up by more important thoughts, her embarrassment driven away by excitement, so this wolf thought that she could outrun Neela eh? With a barking laugh Neela tore after Kiara, darting in to about a foot away from the other wolf before darting backwards and dropping into a play bow similar to Kiara's own, a playful growl escaping her lips.
After several false starts Neela leapt forward, landing to the left of Kiara and slightly behind her. With a dancers grace Neela quickly spun around on the spot, nipped the younger canine lightly on the ear and leapt away again, giving herself a few metres clearance before she spun around and dropped back down into a crouch, letting out a loud, happy bark like only a dog could.
"Got ya!"
The snow had put Neela in a happy and playful mood to begin with, and with both of the wolves acting similarly childish it was hard to feel embarrassed. Neela started jittering from side to side as she waited for Kiara to move, her tail wagging furiously, sending small sprays of snow flying as it did so. Her amber eyes were fixed on the white wolf in an intense, but not unfriendly, stare.
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