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He was a giant, standing over her as she stared up at him. Her feeble attempt to warn him, show that she belonged and he didn’t was useless. Not heeding her growl, he only advanced. Her smallest ounce of courage was smothered, as her came at her. Mati cried, a sharp piecing yelp that rose violently from her throat. Never had a beast come at her with such ferocity, and never had fear rise in her so quickly. The beast fall onto her, and all the large pup could do was tumble backwards in hopes of avoiding the saliva covered fangs that came for her throat.
Pressure could be felt, along the nape of her neck. The thick scruff screamed in pain as the pale teeth scrapped its surface. Mati shut her eyes, letting another cry escape her mouth. How quickly the situation developed and so suddenly threatened her short life would always be a mystery. The pup felt herself become weightless in his jaws, mimicking the hold of a mother carrying her young, but only deadly.