02-08-2010, 12:49 PM
Word count: 204 words
OOC: Wow! You reply fast!
IC:
Echo turned towards the red wolf. At first he thought the wolf was his friend, but after hearing what the wolf had said, he grew very excited. “Thank goodness I found the packs leader!” he said, “My name is Echo, and I wish to join your pack, the AniWaya”. After saying this, he stepped a few feet back. He was scared the wolf might reject him. He had not had any food for quite awhile and his stomach was growling. His legs began to hurt, and he felt very tired. He thought to himself, “If I am allowed into the AniWaya I will meet many friends, but I have no idea if I am worthy of them”. The young wolf was sure he was old enough to join the pack, and was a bit confident with the decision to leave his home to join a safer, friendlier place. If his father were here, he would have been proud of him. He soon spoke a bit more, “I have heard much about your pack from a friend of mine”. Echo was now more at ease and finally smiled at the red wolf with confidence.
OOC: Wow! You reply fast!
IC:
Echo turned towards the red wolf. At first he thought the wolf was his friend, but after hearing what the wolf had said, he grew very excited. “Thank goodness I found the packs leader!” he said, “My name is Echo, and I wish to join your pack, the AniWaya”. After saying this, he stepped a few feet back. He was scared the wolf might reject him. He had not had any food for quite awhile and his stomach was growling. His legs began to hurt, and he felt very tired. He thought to himself, “If I am allowed into the AniWaya I will meet many friends, but I have no idea if I am worthy of them”. The young wolf was sure he was old enough to join the pack, and was a bit confident with the decision to leave his home to join a safer, friendlier place. If his father were here, he would have been proud of him. He soon spoke a bit more, “I have heard much about your pack from a friend of mine”. Echo was now more at ease and finally smiled at the red wolf with confidence.