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Her movements were slow, keeping the distance between them friendly and spacious. It had not been her intention to startle him, and he seemed to notice her before she spoke. Cerulean eyes watched as the male rose, his bulk much larger then her own and yet he stood with a knowledgeable respect. Anu was not one to search for obedience or submission in those that she led. It was respect and loyalty that she searched for in a beast, for they did not just join the pack but the family that they formed. The Lt. General stood still as he spoke, forthright and with little ceremony. Anu didn't mind, but she did with to more of the male before giving access and rank to the raven furred wolf.
"Well," she began, her form showing no tension at the lifting of his crown in her presence. "this is Crimson Dreams, and I'm Anu, the Lt. General here." The introduction was said with a small nod of greeting, hoping that he would extend his own name. She would not assume that he had heard the rumors of war that raged to the north and east of her lands, his scent spoke that he had had not been lingering around either of the fighting packs. Anu, and her Commander, prided themselves of keeping peace within their borders. It provided a safe haven for any that wished to live without such a threat. "Where do you come from?" She asked, her voice neither stern nor soft with weakness.
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