09-09-2010, 04:20 PM
Oh, that looks good to me! An unnamed pack is a good way to go to maintain your story! :3 Glad you were able to fix it! ^^
Edit: I just thought of this too -- you mention she was taken in by a tribe. The Mi'kmaq were the natives in Nova Scotia, so Malachi might know a few customs and stories from the Mi'kmaq people if you wanted to! Just a thought, though!
Edit: I just thought of this too -- you mention she was taken in by a tribe. The Mi'kmaq were the natives in Nova Scotia, so Malachi might know a few customs and stories from the Mi'kmaq people if you wanted to! Just a thought, though!