12-09-2010, 06:52 PM
[html]Haha, I loved the ending 
I’ll make one last post, and then we’ll end it.
Axelle was delirious still, but she had noticed the brute had backed away from her. She wanted to lift her head to look, but she still couldn’t move. She relied on her ears, and nose for that. She heard his frustrated breathing, and soon after footsteps. She squeezed her eyes shut, and tensed whatever muscles she had control over. She stayed like so for about twenty seconds, but then realized the footsteps were running away from her. She exhaled a sigh of relief, and she tried with all her might to roll over onto her belly. The first attempt was unsuccessful as she kept rocking back, and forth. The second attempt, however, was. She managed to roll onto her stomach, at least she was more protected this way.
She knew this forest was treacherous for her to be in now, but she couldn’t feel her body. Everything was numb, but slowly things began to regain feeling. First her toes, then her wrists, then her whole leg, and she tried to stand. She was a little wobbly, but she managed, and her paws took her away from that dreaded forest. She started out gradually, but picked up speed as the blood began flowing swiftly through her veins. She was out of there like a bat out of hell.
I’ll make one last post, and then we’ll end it.Axelle was delirious still, but she had noticed the brute had backed away from her. She wanted to lift her head to look, but she still couldn’t move. She relied on her ears, and nose for that. She heard his frustrated breathing, and soon after footsteps. She squeezed her eyes shut, and tensed whatever muscles she had control over. She stayed like so for about twenty seconds, but then realized the footsteps were running away from her. She exhaled a sigh of relief, and she tried with all her might to roll over onto her belly. The first attempt was unsuccessful as she kept rocking back, and forth. The second attempt, however, was. She managed to roll onto her stomach, at least she was more protected this way.
She knew this forest was treacherous for her to be in now, but she couldn’t feel her body. Everything was numb, but slowly things began to regain feeling. First her toes, then her wrists, then her whole leg, and she tried to stand. She was a little wobbly, but she managed, and her paws took her away from that dreaded forest. She started out gradually, but picked up speed as the blood began flowing swiftly through her veins. She was out of there like a bat out of hell.