02-10-2011, 02:12 PM
Just a few things that I noticed;
You said that she isn't a luperci (our word for werewolf, or shifter) but then you say that her species is werewolf :] Her species would be what type of wolf she is; red wolf, timber wolf, etc.
Also, 'Souls is played in present day. Today on 'Souls the date is 2/10/2011. So your character's birthdate would need to be adjusted; right now it says that Saphrina is born in the future!
Also, we don't allow pups to be loners. If you are intending to join as a pack pup, then you need to post the IC-joining form along with a post of your character entering the lands in one of the IC pack lands. Here is a link to the game stats; you can see that AniWaya is currently most in need of members!
Lastly, we don't allow the usage of any artwork here without the artist's permission. If your avatar was specifically commissioned and payed for by you, then we would need to know that the artist allows its usage on a site like 'Souls. If you don't have the permission to use it on a roleplaying site by the artist or if it wasn't made by you, then it has to go.
Post here again when you have another example or your profile filled out, along with those corrections, please, if you wish to be an adult loner ^^ Thanks, and welcome!!
You said that she isn't a luperci (our word for werewolf, or shifter) but then you say that her species is werewolf :] Her species would be what type of wolf she is; red wolf, timber wolf, etc.
Also, 'Souls is played in present day. Today on 'Souls the date is 2/10/2011. So your character's birthdate would need to be adjusted; right now it says that Saphrina is born in the future!
Also, we don't allow pups to be loners. If you are intending to join as a pack pup, then you need to post the IC-joining form along with a post of your character entering the lands in one of the IC pack lands. Here is a link to the game stats; you can see that AniWaya is currently most in need of members!
Lastly, we don't allow the usage of any artwork here without the artist's permission. If your avatar was specifically commissioned and payed for by you, then we would need to know that the artist allows its usage on a site like 'Souls. If you don't have the permission to use it on a roleplaying site by the artist or if it wasn't made by you, then it has to go.
Post here again when you have another example or your profile filled out, along with those corrections, please, if you wish to be an adult loner ^^ Thanks, and welcome!!