+3. It sucks, do it over >:d Ilu, let me know if this works for you or not. In the words of Spiderman: Everybody gets one.
The colossal male was certain, as his axe whistled in the air towards the golden boy, that his first swing would be too easy on the young warrior. Lone eye was trained on his form, his movement, as the lithe wolf before him swept forward like a shadow, leaving nothing but air in the axe's wake. Muscles tightened as Viking swung down on the spot where the young wolf once was, the initial energy leaving his body and, mistakenly, leaving his side exposed.
But the mistake was soon found, and corrected, as the edge of a sword bit into his left side. The giant one's body tightened up once more, feeling the blood of the new wound stain his off-white torso and drip down towards his fur slacks. Damn, it would take the foreign warrior quite a while to clean it, too. Years of training, however, focused the pain into anger, and a determination to draw blood for blood. Viking bared his teeth, grunting at both the pain that was delivered upon himself and the mistake of leaving himself exposed - discipline drove the giant's thoughts into never going easy again.
"Good," he uttered briefly, back still turned towards the young male. Seconds after, Viking stepped backwards, axe still tightly clutched in his right hand. His own shoulder pointed towards the golden boy, King thrust his elbow into the very base of the young one's neck, this time staring directly into the ruby eyes of the warrior. "Første leksjon," came a guttural reply, shifting his right hand so that it was at the base of the blade. "No expose weak points." His words, though broken, were short and to the point. Though it was a bit hypocritical, what was done was done; the effort King put forth only gushed more of the red liquid to seep out his own side, the reminder of exposing himself. It was to be ignored for now, however, though Viking would never openly admit that he was learning as much as he was teaching.
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