Joining- Loner
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Everything looks awesome, but for two tiny, tiny details (they are of so little importance, I will accept you anyway, no worries at all~):

Quote:They drugged her and took her to Nova Scotia, where they hoped to sell her for money...

There isn't money in the Luperci world -- currency like coins or paper money, the only value it has is aesthetic value (e.g., wolves only care about it if it looks pretty, like a coin necklace or something to that effect). Perhaps the traders were instead in dire need of some kind of resource? The economy of 'Souls and most every other place in the universe are barter or trade-based rather than monetarily based.

If you'd be so kind as to edit your profile to reflect that they were hoping to trade her rather than exchange her for money, please? :3 You don't need to be specific in what they were looking to trade for, but if you want to -- horses, maybe? There are a few packs here with horses they might've hoped to trade with, or Freetown, which is a bit further south along Maine's coast. It's in the same general area, though. ;D Again, though, that's totally optional, and I'm primarily concerned with the reference to cash money being changed to reflect a barter-based economy. ^^;;

Quote:...she always knows whether others have good or bad intentions.

Just make sure you realize that if a character has a bad intent but they're being perfectly friendly and nice, your character surely can't read that other character's thoughts. :O That's called metagaming. You don't have to edit this part of your profile, just make sure your character isn't acting as a mind-reader if the other character is being perfectly friendly. :3

Everything else looks wonderful, though -- welcome to 'Souls! Big Grin We're quite glad to have you, and if you have any further questions about the game, feel free to shoot me a PM or something. Big Grin


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