That's an awesome start! Another thing you can do to add to your posts as well as adding the scene is to add your character's thoughts and feelings at the moment.
Skye, lost in thought, suddenly snapped out of it when she heard someone else coming; soon, their scent thick with the smell of AniWaya. She remembered back when Dawali had visited her pack, so long ago when it had first began - she needed to see him again, if only to exchange on news, if not to trade. The male had been very kind to her and Ouija, she recalled, and felt a small pang of sadness as she remembered that Ouija had left to be with Anathema and his family.
She didn't blame him; it had been just after the horrid disaster with Argul, and many of the members of her pack had been feeling unsafe. He had left to be with Addison; she would have to check up on them as well, she realized.
For now, however, she looked at the AniWayan that stood before her; she was a pure shade of white, and said her name; Ayasha. Skye smiled back at her.
"My name is Skye Collins," she said amiably. The girl, although seeming to be younger than her, also seemed to be very nice and polite, an observation she had made about many of the tribe.
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