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The girl was smart enough to keep her posture submissive, which pleased the wolfish part of Ezekiel. He was still possessed by that blood and thus served it. Instinct demanded his dominance, something that harkened back in his genetics far before the de le Poer’s had been wolves. Kaena’s re-introduction of dog blood had stirred primal things that woke from their ancient sleep. A trio of beasts lived within him, a living chimera of his ancestral genetic pool. This was why he let out a sharp warning growl and showed his teeth as she met his gaze—it was a wolfish reaction and one he could not stop. Not while he ran on fumes, and not while paranoia whispered from every shadowed part of the forest.
“And what, Aysun, can you offer? I have enough children here to worry about, so why would I need another?” She was not a child, but her age compared to his was enough that she could be considered such. Max was like her, and while the boy was quickly improving as a hunter (gray pelt and all) he was still dealing with whatever trauma had turned him into a “monster”. This girl looked like she had kept herself fed alright without aid, though she was (as expected of loners) thin.
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