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The dark pelted female was a naturally motherly creature, it had not always been that way with the sable woman, she had hated being pregnant the first two times and had not been the best mother to her second litter, the truth was she had barely been a mother to them at all, she regretted this now, but at the time, when it had happened she had been completely unable to care for herself let alone for them. Khaden and Dhalia had been a product of rape and Soran was unable to look at them, she had drunk herself into sickness, it had been a long time before the sable female felt sane enough to come back and attempt to be a mother. She had been a much better mother to her eldest and youngest litters, they had had a close relationship, she loved them, she loved Khaden and Dhalia as well, but it had taken a long time for her to realise this. But now, now the dark female was a very attentive mother, as she had aged her nature had softened, she had become the mother that her pups had deserved, Conri had had a young mother that had been unsure of what to do with him, but he had never been short of love, the youngest litter had been doted on and adored. But Soran still felt guilty about her youngest litter, though she knew that at the time leaving them with Phasma had been the kindest thing that she had been able to do. Now though she was becoming a good mother, grandmother and great grandmother and she would not change her family for the world. If all went well with Deuce then the dark female would be gaining yet more family, she would have at least three step children, how strange that would be for the dark female, although she could not help but imagine that it would be wonderful. The dark female loved her family and was more than delighted that it seemed to have been growing.
The ebony female was worried for the young brown female, the young girl seemed to have something on her mind, something that had concerned her. The dark female had no idea what it could have happened to cause the young female to react in such a way, she knew that there had been a lot to take in for the young female, she had joined a new pack, seen new wolves, learnt about shifting into being a Luperci, she could very well be overwhelmed. The sable mother moved closer to the young female as she looked at her apologetically, this made the ebony mother worry more and she moved to rest a gentle hand on her shoulder, she smiled at the young female, attempting to be comforting, she crouched beside her. All of a sudden the young female spoke, saying that she was fine, that relieved the dark lady, but then the young female ended her sentence with mom, that was a staggering thing for her to have said to the dark female. She wondered if she had said it by accident, but then again she had said it with such certainty, the dark female smiled broadly as she said that, moving to stroke the young female's cheek in a motherly fashion. She could feel her heart warm as she thought on what the young female had said. She moved to stand, smiling down at the young girl.
"Thank you my darling, I am glad that you are alright. Come on then, let's find you somewhere to sleep." The dark mother replied, gesturing for the small female to follow her down to corridor so that they could find Blind a bed to sleep in. There were plenty of rooms that the young female could sleep in, after all there were plenty of spare rooms that Soran was sure that the young female would like.
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