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Had the world always been this beautiful? She watched the glorious patterns all around her, how the world twisted into new shapes that moved like liquids - not to mention the liquids! The water rings that grew from her stomach as she laughed grew and grew endlessly, moving irregularly regularly, fascinating her to no end. She watched one of them as it slowly flew from her, expanding eternally and creating children as it hit things in its path - one of them was Barrett. She smiled at him as she moved towards him, and he did the same. He was strangely appealing, in all his flat and wet fur. Not skinny, but muscular in all the right places. He halted once he was close enough, and did something surprising to her: the hand that he extended was going for her braid. She watched him as he played with it for a moment, before apparently realizing what he had done. His eyes were wide, but Ulilohi laughed heartily again - more at his face than anything else. "Ale ayv vtla dinelvdodi!" While it could have been expressed in offended terms, Ulilohi's deep voice rang with playfulness and gentle taunts. Before he could answer, she clutched her nose and slipped down under the water with a giggle.
Her intentions with doing so were vague even to her, but as she entered this other realm her own eyes burst open. Her braids danced around her head like water weeds, their feathers soaked, but dancing nonetheless. Fascinated, she sxclaimed sounds of joy underwater, releasing a little family of bubbles that fled to the surface, their own little surfaces looking like glimmering ornament-stones as they fled upwards. Sitting there, her legs bent and her arms flapping in the water to keep her down, she studied how everything looked better under water. Better, majestic, elegant. Even Barretts legs and the fur on his tail moved in beautiful waves, and she giggled a little at how he looked both silly and attractive at once. The underwater muffled her deep voice, but she was only giggling to herself, anyway. She quickly swam to the side, and one hand moved foward to pull his tail.
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