04-07-2009, 11:27 PM
One thing that I noticed was in your "Skills" section. You said that one of the reasons that your character used a bow was because it did not require strength. Realistically, a bow, if it is to kill a deer, should have at least a 45 pound pull-back weight, and that's the bare minimum. This strength would be drawn from the shoulder muscles, which most girls and runners don't have. More importantly, she would have to have strength and endurance, because she would have to be able to pull back the string to the maximum pullback, hold it long enough to aim, and release smoothly and with control. And of course she'd have to be able to pull it back again. This is actually more strenuous than you might think.... (And I know this because I am an archer) ^=^ I know that you want it your wolf to be able to pull a bow off, but her speed should be able to allow her to hunt, even if she is weak. Rabbit doesn't necessarily require strength, ^=^