Re-joining XD

[Laidaria]

Character Name:
Character Birthdate: February 22nd, 2008
Gender: Female
Species: Black Bernard's Wolf
Is your character a Luperci?: Yes Luperci Verto
Other 'Souls Characters: none
How you found 'Souls?: (Not required for returning or current members.)
Are you joining a pack?: CdM
If joining a pack, are you joining IC or OOC?: I would like to be accepted OOCly, but I will still be doing a joining thread if I am accepted
Profile or writing examples: http://www.soulsrpg.com/ipb/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4134415 (Profile)

[Tayui Aston]

Welcome to 'Souls!

Congratulations! You've been accepted into the craziest bunch of roleplayers on the vast Internet! As you've opted to join your pack In Character, you can now begin posting -- you may start your joining thread whenever you're ready. Make sure you check the pack information to see if the leadership requires anything extra from you! Post-Joining Process Mandatory: [*]Make an In Character post within five days. Post a thread request to get started, or consider starting or replying to an open thread. [*]Please let us know in the Absentee Thread if you plan to be absent for more than four days.[*]Keep reading! While there's only a minimum of three topics you have to read to join the game, we provide a wealth of information for a reason -- we expect players to read and reference this material often while they roleplay at 'Souls. Preferred: [*]If you're leaving us, please try to let us know in the Player Updates forum. There is no penalty for leaving; you're free to re-join at any time later. Still Need a Bit of Help? You can find a wealth of information on the RP Guide. Don't feel pressured to read it all at once -- the guide is a huge resource and is meant to be used as a reference. Post any questions you may have in the Questions and Help forum. Check the FAQ first, though! Failing all else, contact a staff member. If you need help getting adjusted to your pack, you should talk to your pack leader! They can help you to understand the pack's rank system and how to get a better rank, as well as direct you to plots, potential thread partners, and active members of the pack who may be interested in engaging you.

[Tayui Aston]

Hello! You've been accepted, but this is conditional on a few things. Please fix your profile with the following things:

• The Bernard's Wolf is extinct so you'll need to pick a living wolf instead. The arctic wolf is a good option since it inhabits Banks Island, which is where the Bernard's Wolf originally lived. You can check our wolf subspecies guide to see allowed species at 'Souls!
• Make sure you don't forget to use apostrophes! If you use a contraction (eg: she will to she'll, you need a contraction. You can't just say "shell".) Please edit your appearance and add in apostrophes where necessary. If you're not sure where, copy it to a Word document to check the spelling.

I hope that helps! Let me know once you've made this changes.

There are also some things that are not vital and do not need to be changed, but are worth pointing out nonetheless:

• For tattoos to be visible on canines, they would have to shave the fur. So just remember that, since you mention she has a lot of yellow tattoos. They wouldn't be visible unless she shaved the fur to expose it. ^^ You can use paint if you want, or dye. Those are all good options! This isn't really something you need to fix -- just something I thought I would mention. <3
• In your appearance section, you state that "Laidaria is black from head to toe". You might want to explain that she is naturally black, but has a lot of yellow markings, maybe like so: "Laidaria is naturally black from head to toe; however she also has yellow markings from paint."