Mockingbird Song
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I'm using my character, Skye Collins, for this thread. Smile You don't have to make very long posts, but strive for at least 200 words!

The wolfess stalked in the forest, searching for nothing in particular. She was in her Lupus form, the most graceful out of all her forms, and one of the forms that she liked the best. Her creamy colored coat glistened in the sun, which let its rays filter through the green trees, casting a bright green light on the forest floor. She walked, her paw steps barely making a sound, through the forest, smelling all the different smells of the plants and the animals and even the dirt beneath her feet.

She stopped to sit on a log. Its bark was hard and scratchy, but her fur prevented her skin from being damaged. She sat and looked as a small, green snake slithered across the forest floor. It wound between the trees, its red forked tongue flicking in and out of its mouth and its black eyes, unblinking, focused on its path ahead. It was a rather beautiful creature, Skye noted as it slithered silently away, its green scales flashing. It must be strange not to have any arms or legs, and have to live your life on your belly, creeping along the floor slowly, like a snail. She knew that it may be poisonous as to ward off any predators that might eat it, which compensated for the smallness and lack of other defenses.

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Zaine was walking through the forest, minding his own business And. enjoying his surroundings when he herd someone, else in the forest because at this time , his eyes were itchy because of something in the forest. Zaine had to use his nose right now , so he sniffed and he smelt flowers something sweet, it kinda reminded him of someone close to him. He followed, the smell with the vivid vision of, someone beside him, Zaine looked down at his necklace of teeth and beads knowing that this had something to do with it.

The smell was getting stronger and stronger. Zaine could now hear something else, he could see it was something long and curvy. he followed the creature out of interest, but something told him to stay back. As he followed it Zaine, had memories of somebody showing him some white flowers "these are white roses", "roses", he remembered saying to her. He somehow remembered a female voice, it was very beautiful like the flower, Zaine could hear something. It was a croak and then the memories started over again, the female voice started again "this is a frog zaine", "a frog" he remembered repeating, a frog it was. Zaine could see it in front of him while following the creature but he did not know why, suddenly he saw a cream wolf woman with white roses, in her hair just like the other woman, he looked at her, "hello who are you".
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Remember, don't just copy the words and replace them - try to insert the commas, periods, and ideas on your own! If you need help, insert your post in Microsoft Word before you submit it - if it's underlined with a green line, that means it's incorrect. You can right click it to correct it. Smile

She sat on the log, her toes digging in the dirt and getting dirty. The snake was long gone, and Skye wondered where such creatures lived - perhaps underground, where they could slither to safety if under attack, or maybe in a high tree; she thought she had seen snakes climbing trees before and sticking to the bark like some sort of sticky snail. Before she could think any more on the subject, however, she heard the crunching of grass and a voice saying hello and asking who she was.

Skye looked over at the person who had spoken to her - it was a wolf. This wolf was male - she could tell by the scent and the posture - and his fur was a white that gleamed in the sun. She smiled at him - she was generally friendly to people that she didn't know unless they were hostile towards her or her pack. This person, however, didn't seem hostile or mean-spirited in the least, and she dipped her head towards him.

My name is Skye Collins, she said benignly. What's yours? she asked curiously; noting his white pelt, she wondered if he was a D'Angelo, related to Naniko and Ouija, the other snowy members of the family. Or perhaps he was just a newcomer to Souls; Skye saw many of those lately, and it seemed that the Nova Scotia peninsula was gaining popularity in the world.

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Zaine was happy that he was permitted to come closer to the wolf woman, and he was even more surprised when she asked him his name. "My Name is Zaine I'm sorry but I can't find her in this strange place" Zaine was wondering why he, was asking this woman to help him find someone maybe because she reminded him of his mother. Suddenly he was remembering something-the forest was dark and he was running someone was chasing him,the same flashback always came too him for same reason. Zaine suddenly felt sick-this was another side effect of having that vision and he staggered to a nearby rock and collapsed upon it.
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Smile Feel free to look at my post for ideas to improve your post length!

Skye nodded as the loner introduced himself as Zaine - she knew that he was a loner because his smell, rather than belonging to a single pack and having the smells of many wolves, was only of himself and of the forest that surrounded them. Her understanding, however, quickly changed to confusion as she heard him say that he couldn't find someone in this place - who was he looking for? What was he talking about?

Skye stood abruptly as Zaine began to look rather sick - without another word, he collapsed on a large gray rock nearby. Skye walked towards him, the crinkling of leaves underfoot less loud than the voice in her head - what was wrong with this loner, and why had he collapsed so suddenly? Who was he looking for? She forced the thoughts out of her mind as she stepped over towards the loner, who was still on the rock.

She looked down at the white wolf, concern etched on her face. Are you alright? she asked worriedly. What happened? She had never seen someone act quite like this, other than herself when she was pregnant and would begin to collapse or suddenly feel ill - however, she was certain that this male was not pregnant. Perhaps he had a disease?

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Zaine was running from the roaring sound behind him-the smell of burning filling his nostrils and his brain the leaves under his feet cracking like bones. And then he woke up with the idea of this flower haired woman asking him what was wrong "I don't know I always get visions I have never been able to work out". Then out of the blue he could smell something it- was very strong from ever since he could remember but the problem was Zaine had not yet been taught too identify all smells-so he decided to look at faces instead. He looked at the flower wolf's face she still looks confused about something, Zaine fell onto yet another rock this time feeling the pain it was a bit like a bullet going through him-and then he appeared in front of a fire dancing around a fire but before he could think he was awake and back in the forest again.
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Skye looked down at the white wolf - she was suddenly reminded of her friend, Orin Takekuro, who had mysteriously vanished after Argul had ravaged her pack. She had worried for her friend, but no more since Niro Takekuro came seeking trade and had given her news that Orin was alright - still, she missed her friend, and this person reminded her of her suddenly; Orin had had troubles in her life as well, more than most could say.

She listened as the man said that he didn't know, and that he always got visions. Visions? The only visions Skye had ever had were dreams when she was sleeping, but she supposed that people could have sudden visions when they were awake. Before she could comment on this strange behavior, however, he collapsed on yet another rock, and Skye could see his eyes widening in pain. Then his eyes seemed to go out of focus for a few seconds - maybe he was having another vision - and then he came back.

Let me help you up, she said, extending her creamy-white hand out to the man who was lying on the rock; visions or no visions, that didn't seem to be a very comfortable position to be in.

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