Since the descriptions are on the same line that you have the !!! markers, it's including all of what you typed as the sub-header. You can either move the descriptions to another line right below them or bold the "optime," "secui," etc, parts separately like this:
'''Optime''' -- Description goes here
Hope that makes sense?
hah okay, thank you!!! I am nubbins at this :x
Okay, I tinkered around a bit, and I think the (!!!) third sub-headers are showing up on Anann's because you use them before any of the (!!) second ones.
For the first instances of headers and subheaders on her page, you have it as:
! Pre-'Souls history
!!! (re)birth
If you want the second subheaders to show up in the toc on her page, you should change it to:
! Pre-'Souls history
!! (re)birth
and then adjust any of the other subheaders further down the page accordingly so the right things show up in the toc. It looks like the toc takes the first two types of headers listed on the page and uses them for the list. It shows up differently on your player profile because you listed a (!!) second subheader before a (!!!) third one.
Hope I explained that clearly enough? XD; If not, lemme know, haha.