Stalking 101
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Night had come so quickly, stealing through the apple orchard in big, ground swallowing leaps. Finn turned her eyes towards the edge of daylight, the rosy glow in the west that was the sun’s swan song for today. She shivered as she slipped and skid across the wet grass, her missing toes a hindrance now. She had no trouble finding her way in the dark, her eyes were probably in the best working order of all her senses, but she was never at home here, in this twilight world. It brought unhappy thoughts and memories and she could do nothing but drown in them when night came knocking.

Alastair was gone, vanished, off to do whatever deer did. It was these times that she realized how much she enjoyed his company. It was weird, traveling around with something that had once been labeled “prey” in her youth, but the more time they spent together, the easier it got. An odd couple of freaks, they were. She liked to have Alastair around, because he gave her an excuse not to join a pack. It’s easier to say no when you had a three hundred pound deer on your hands. She didn’t know what Alastair thought about her wishy-washynesss. Hell, she didn’t even know if he understood! Neither was fluent in the other’s tongue, and were forced to play charades to get a message across. She sometimes got the feeling that his big, docile eyes were silently judging her, but that could just be her paranoia coming through.

Finn carefully picked her way around the tree trunks and rotten apples, nose full of the scent of ripe fruit. The apples hung like little planets, round and fat and glistening softly in the light of the moon. The fluffy clouds scudding across the sky sent shadows rippling across the grass, and not for the first time Finn found herself in a gloom. She was far from home, already three years old and nothing to show for it except a missing ear and a handful of scars. No mate, no pups, no pack. To make matters worse, she was a regular wolf in a land of extraordinary creatures who could walk around on two legs and were capable of feats she had never dreamed of.

Her musings were stopped short as a new scent unfurled itself in her nose. Finn stopped, peering down at the grass. Paw-marks, lot’s of them, scent markings too. Her gaze flew to the trees, all of which had been slashed and scratched at wolf height and higher. Finn shuffled nervously from foot to foot, looking out at the land beyond. She was tempted, so very tempted. Maybe they would accept her. Maybe not. She dithered there, at the edge, waiting to see what would happen. Minutes passed, and no one came, so the gray wolf retreated a few steps, sitting herself beneath the shadow of an apple tree, head on her paws, watching the borderline.






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Your writing is lovely :]
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His tail swung around behind him as he covered new ground, excited and scared at the same time. He was not so young anymore, but childishness still clung firmly to his behavior, and he was scared of the darkness. Not just uncomfortable, but outright scared. That wasn't childish in itself, perhaps, but his reasons for not turning back, were. He was not scared enough to turn around and go home, because the element of excitement was too strong. It was another of his adventures; he needed to keep doing them to have something to talk about. Alexey would probably be amazed when he told her how brave he was. If she wasn't interested, well.. then that was just too bad for him. He was interested. Although, Alexey had been telling him that he was pretty old now, for doing things like these. Luckily she hadn't told him to live somewhere else, that would be bad. He wanted to live with Alexey forever, in a way, but not really. Both options had pro's and con's, and he wasn't sure if either outweighed the other.


........The young boy's paws carried him further than where his pack's scent clung to the trees, the grass, the earth. Tan ears bent towards his skull of their own accord, although not all the way. Somewhere in between, they stopped, and sometimes flicked this way and that. Like the boy, they could not decide where to go, but when his nose picked up a stranger's scent, they flattened fully. He halted abruptly, well aware that his way of moving was hardly stealthy; he had always bee clumsy, walking into things and making a lot of noise. Now, his every move felt like it created a wave of sound greater than mountains, and he stood still, toes ruffling drying grass and leaves. He thought he saw a shape somewhere ahead, but he dared not do anything; he waited it out. The head of him was as close to the ground as could be without falling, and his tail was dead still, awaiting something to happen. He was rigid and tense as the trees around him, but if that shape in the darkness proved to be a someone, his body might very well change to become a wave itself, rushing back to the safe shores of home.



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WC: 300+
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Finn drew in a deep breath, letting the air slide over her tongue. Her lantern eyes flickered at the little shape on the edge of the border, and her head tilting to the side of it’s own accord until it was almost completely sideways. She had heard him coming, but dismissed the noise as some nocturnal creature rooting around in the dirt for food. How careless. She stretched slowly, almost unfolding from the ground, and shifted more into the light. If the pup had been a bigger wolf, she wouldn’t have given him such an advantage, but considering he looked ready to turn tail and run, Finn figured that letting him see her in better light would perhaps calm him down.

Finn drew in a deep breath, letting the air slide over her tongue. Her lantern eyes flickered at the little shape on the edge of the border, and her head tilting to the side of it’s own accord until it was almost completely sideways. She had heard him coming, but dismissed the noise as some nocturnal creature rooting around in the dirt for food. How careless. She stretched slowly, almost unfolding from the ground, and shifted more into the light. If the pup had been a bigger wolf, she wouldn’t have given him such an advantage, but considering he looked ready to turn tail and run, Finn figured that letting him see her in better light would perhaps calm him down.

Then again, maybe not. She realized belatedly that her appearance could be construed as frightening to some, what with the scars and the missing ear and lip. Finn clamped her mouth shut, determined not to let the jagged row of incisors show. She liked puppies, she envied their mothers. Finn had never been able to settle down and have some of her own, and so it always did her heart good to see one. Considering he was on the opposite line of the border, he must have been the child of one of the pack members. Finn shrugged her shoulders uncomfortably. Could she get in trouble for this? Packs guarded their pups without hesitation, and a lone wolf sulking around would probably be attacked. And yet…

"Hi" She said quietly, curling her tail about her feet, "Out for a midnight stroll?" Finn’s eyes, so used to the darkness, could pick out even the minute details about the little wolf. He was very young, not even a year old. Finn was quite impressed by his inquisitiveness. At his age, she had been huddled up in the den at this time of night, sleeping or listening to her father’s stories. She didn't have had the courage to wander out into the snow filled nights. The gray wolf hadn’t been around pups too much, by the time she was born both of her brothers were well over two years, and her father was nearly six. There hadn’t been any other siblings, and no other packs nearby, so Finn grew up playing with Brom and Aegnus, neither of whom ever played fairly or even nicely.







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Sorry for the wait. As noted in absentees, I've been out of the country without internet access! Back on track, now :]
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He thought he heard sounds that were not there, and his ears moved abruptly at the smallest of noises. Two silvery blue eyes were fixed on the something ahead of him, and his mouth sucked in air with a surprised hissing sound when it rose into the light. A female, a stranger, and scarred beyond what his young eyes had ever seen. But, he knew she was no monster: monsters didn't look like wolves. Luckily, he had been spared of paranoia, and trusted his eyes to reveal the truth. His body remained stiff, but his eyes searched the form, moving up and down across scars and strange features. Perhaps his face shone brightly of his curiosity, perhaps it shone only of his fear. He was oblivious to his own appearance as he studied her, blinking a moment when she spoke. The male had been too preoccupied with investigating her scars to remember that this was the kind of situation one would normally speak to each other.


........In his mind he repeated that she was a wolf, not a monster, and his muscles relaxed slowly. He still stood rooted, but now his tail moved uncertainly, as if wanting to wag, but not knowing whether it could. The male found his voice, a mix of a childish soprano and the adult basso, and it was the former which characterized him now; Yeah. His eyes were still large and fascinated, but he remembered that he should continue. When he spoke, he remembered something else: that he was scared. His head moved to hang downwards in shame as he admitted his grand failure at adventuring. An adventurer was not afraid. I was exploring but then it became night... and then I got scared... His eyes let her form go and studied the ground instead. It was embarrassing.


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WC: 300+
Smile

Finn flicked her ear, amused by the little pup’s goggling stared. She wasn’t really bothered, double-takes and staring had been a part of her life since she had lost her ear so many years ago. She had never been overly concerned with her looks, knowing that the more she fought the more they were ruined. But since Finn had never had time to form an opinion about how beautiful or ugly she as before the first scars, she couldn’t bring herself care now. ”There’s… nothing wrong with the night.” Finn said, knowing it was true for many, but a lie for herself. Pups like this had so much life in front of them, there were worse things to be afraid of then the dark.

”Mind you, I still prefer the day.” Finn loved the heat and light of the sun, nearly worshiped it. The winter months were very difficult for her, as they combined two things she hated: cold and darkness. If she had the inclination, she would have migrated south, towards the blue waters and scorching sands of the equatorial countries. But Finn was tired of traveling, tired of dragging her body onwards and onwards in a never-ending journey. She had to give this place at least some kind of chance before her wanderlust ways caught hold again.

The gray she-wolf fell silent again, slightly at a loss. IF she had met this pup during the day, she might have been more boisterous and outgoing. As it was, she had already retreated into her shell for the night, to weather the thoughts that rambled through her brain and eroded her confidence with their precise blows. ”So, what’s your name?” She asked, laying down more comfortably in the grass. Here, with the moon being veiled and unveiled constantly by the clouds, she was almost invisible, even in direct light. Her pelt, with it’s shadows and hues of slate and iron made for amazing camouflage.





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He composed himself: he knew it wasn't good to stare. He liked being well-behaved, because everyone seemed to appreciate it. Living in a world where everything was good (except the time when it wasn't so good but they were small and fleeting), it was logical for him to strive to always be good. He was simply oblivious to the real world, and how such things are not, and cannot be black and white. His hopes and this imaginary world was what kept him running, and that was what made him stretch his form now, from the little tense ball of a boy to the trying-to-be more relaxed young male. He should try to be brave, because bravery was a good thing. He looked at the strange female and swallowed while she spoke, replying with a feeble and uncertain voice. Yeah... maybe,

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As soon as she voiced her preference for the day, his form relaxed better, and his ears and tail moved suddenly, in a perky and happy way. Yeah I do too! It's not as dark as the night. Stating the obvious: Emwe was an expert. He didn't really have that much more to say about that, though, and simply looked at the female now, mood lifted and slowly forgetting about the darkness. His eyes were more adjusted to looking at her now, and even though her furs were really good for hiding when it was dark, he could see her better now. She still looked scarred and kind of scary, but her eyes weren't scary, not really. They were nice, like most people's eyes. His line of thought on that subject was broken when she spoke again, and now Emwe was feeling much better. My name is Emwe! Pausing, he glanced to the ground before he remembered that there was some sort of polite sentence that usually came after what he had just said. Eyes changed visibly when he remembered what it was, and his gaze was lifted abruptly to look at the femme, while he exclaimed the conventional phrase, voice laden with joy. What's your name?


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WC: 300+

”S’ Finn Fidh.” She said, amused by his exuberance. It was nice to see pups happy, it made her feel a little light-hearted as well. Finn remembered some of her father’s nieces and nephews, they had never been very happy. A big bunch of lazy malcontents they had been. Useless at hunting, too. Finn remembered the day she met them very well. It was the one time she, Aegnus and Brom had actually stopped their usual infighting and competed with someone else. The grey wolf still remembered the smug smile on her father’s face as she bested her elder, male cousin at a sparring match. Alaric probably never lived that down.

”I couldn’t help but notice that you aren’t particularly adept at moving quietly.” Finn said, quirking an eyebrow. She’d learned from the best, taught how to move as quietly as a ghost by dark-furred and low-voiced Brom. When she wasn’t facing off with Aegnus, she was busy stalking the little snow-hares that peppered the mountainsides. They had nearly been as dumb as her cousins, sitting like oddly shaped stones till Finn bounded upon them out of nowhere. She’d taken to stalking prey like a duck took to water. Since her family had been so small, it was hard to hunt bigger game, and rabbits, mice, foxes, badgers, raccoons and even skunks had become fair game.

She looked at the little pup again, trying to divine if he was someone important. If he was the son of an Alpha, she could get in big trouble for luring him off the pack boundaries, no matter how innocent her intentions. Finn wanted to pass on some of the things she knew, and this young wolf was as good a candidate as any. Perhaps he’d eventually impress a future mate with his skills if all went well. That is, if he even accepted her invitation. She hadn’t voiced it yet, but depending on his reply, she just might. Knowledge wasn’t meant to be hoarded like a dragon with his gold, it was meant to be shared, so that others might profit.





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Not only was this female funny-looking, but she spoke funny too! It took the poor male a few seconds to realize that her sentence had meant "it's Finn Fidh"-something. He was confused. Why hadn't she said "it's" like everyone else did? In total, she was very foreign. And her name was strange, too. But it was funny to say, probably, and Emwe gave it a taste. Him and Lysander had done that a lot, to play with words. It had been great fun, and when he thought about it he remembered those days with a touch of nostalgia. Finn Fidddh, Finnnn - it's a funny name! His ears were pointing upwards to the sky and he took on a halfway playful stance. Social convention didn't bother him, and people rarely reprimanded him for it. Emwe giggled at himself, and concluded that the F-sound was very entertaining right then.
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A warm blush rose to his cheeks as she said that he was clumsy. He knew that, actually! And even if he liked the day better than the night because it was lighter, he was glad that it was night now. Since it was dark, the female probably couldn't see the warm color beneath the earthy fur in his face. That was good, it was embarrassing when others could see that you were embarrassed - it made everything worse and bad! His voice hesitated as he replied, all-too aware of himself now. Yeeaaah.... I'm clumsy, says Alexey. The sentence was accompanied by him trying to hide his face behind his shoulder without making it obvious; he failed at that as well. All in all, Emwe was quite lovable, but not so successful with stalking, hunting, or hiding any features of his own personality.

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Finn laughed and smiled. ”Finn is supposed to mean “fair” but that’s where it’s wrong.” She pulled a face, tongue lolling from her mouth, ”I’m not exactly the fairest in the land.” Finn knew that her mother hadn’t named her, for she wouldn’t have let the double dishonour of being given both a male first name and surname. Because of Cuhlain, the entire line of the ó Maoláins had petered out, ending with the ignoble death of Mab ó Maoláin at the jaws of a couple starving coyotes.

”Nothing to worry about,” She assured him, ”I don’t think there’s a pup in the world that can move quietly. When I was young my legs were entirely too long to be manageable. My brother had a huge head and paws, and a skinny little body.” Aegnus had grown into himself, though. He had become a hulking wolf by the time Finn left. She may have been tall and long, but even in the best of seasons Finn didn’t have much meat or muscle on her bones. And that was the way it had to be. It kept her quick and agile, able to turn and twist like a cat. It was because of her light weight and slim build that she was able to move quietly.

”I could help you, if you want. Teach you. It’s not too hard to sneak once you get the hang of it.” There was a trick to stalking silently, a mindset. Once you could reach that place, where all the shadows seemed a part of your body and the distractions faded away, you could move like a ghost. It silenced the quibbles and worries and voices in her mind, that place. Nothing was important but the prey, or her objective. Finn only wished that she could stay like that forever.





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Sorry for the wait again. Mass attack of assignments is over now, I hope to be more reliable with my activity. Word count: 400

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........The young male cocked his head sideways as he studied her face, not really sure what she meant. Sure, she looked weird and kind of scary, but what did that have to do with justice? She wasn't fair? He didn't understand. Perhaps she meant something else, or perhaps she didn't know the words like he did. She probably did mean something else, but he could not decipher what. His understanding only reached as far as his vocabulary would take him. Smiling with his tongue out instead of saying anything, he just looked at her dumbly. It was dark anyway; she probably couldn't see him that well either.
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When Finn described her brother, Emwe looked down on himself, lifting a front paw and then the next, studying himself. He was not skinny! He was quite big, and proud of it. Bigger than Conor, and that was a good thing, right? In fact, he was chubby, and some of that puppy fat lingered even though he was nearing adolescence. Chances were he was going to be a little chubby the rest of his life, unless life forced him into an existance less comfortable than the current. Either way he was still built strong, and in that sense resembled his father much closer than his litter brother Conor. I'm not skinny, I'm pretty big. But I keep falling and bumping into things and stuff. His face was a disappointed frown; disappointed in its owner. What good was the ability to walk and run and everything, when he just kept hurting himself? Stupid legs, they never did what he wanted them to.
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His frown was turned upside down and his ears perked up instantly as the female offered to help him. Oh! Oh maybe now he could become a hunter! He could catch rabbits! And next time he met Coli he would brag about how good he was, and she would be really really impressed. Yeah. His tail wagged in the dark evening air, and his voice rang quite happily as he blurbled out an excited acceptance. "Oh yes great I can catch rabbits and everything!" Satisfied with the situation, he allowed his legs to bounce a little before settling again, now focused. It was good to bounce sometimes. In a very serious voice and with a very serious face, he asked the female what came next. "So what do I have to do?"


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