Critic Please!
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NOTE: THIS IS WRITTEN AS IF HE'S AN ADULT!
Okay, So I'm sorting out my new character Mathias. I've just regististered him and need to build him up and then wait for the SA to say yes. Here we go:

Mathias Venturi is a tall, but thin Coy-Dog-wolf. His height reaches 7.9 foot (When fully grown at least), covering his body is a pelt made up of golds and yellows, sadled by dustings of grey and black. His eyes burn he brightest orange. He looks like Coyote but with a wolf-dog size.

His lineage is Timber Wolf, Nothern Coyote, Californian Coyote, Shiloh Shepard, St. Bernard, Irish Wolfhound, Husky, Anatolian Shepherd, Akita, Kuvasz, Caucasian Mountain Dog. He is decended from a group of dogs that were kept by some dude who wanted to one-up everybody and make the biggest dog breed ever! This is what makes Mathias so tall, but he gained the coyote figure. His father passed on the dog genes while his mother passed on the wolf and coyote. Overall he is about 25% coyote, 25% wolf and 50% dog. Both his parent were Luperci Ortus.

He is a weirdo and will put anything in his mouth. Booze, Drug, ECT.

His voice- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKFd_Dj5TIw

His birthdate is July 8th 2010. He has two brothers, Christian and Adriel, both in the same litter as him. They we're the first borns and only ones as far as their concerned. All three we're born to Loners living in human apartments in California. They were not mates but hung around together on a regular basis. Their names were Katy March and Sulivan Shear.

In his spare time you'll find him either snowboarding (actually sledging, but he titles is boarding to impress people), climbing, something along that lines, but usually the first and the latter. He is skilled at carving and despite his age is more than good enough to craft any wares. He can read basic things and paints/draws well. He is an adaquit fighter, using a simple hidden knife mechanism on his right arm, which he bought from an Italian gent somewhere on the coast. His sled is a crappy home make thing, so is his skateboard. Mathias is also skilled at art, yet is quite serective about his drawings.

His personality is the laidback Californian sterotype, being a child he is usually oblivious to danger and that gets him into trouble. He can be serious, and cruel, when angry he tends to switch into the type of boy who pulls the wings off of butterflys. He is studious and will do what he is told if ordered by someone he respects. He'll use being in the adult ranks to his advantage, but also the fact he's under a year old. He gets very jealous if he is not the centre of attention. He will probably always be a whiney man child.

His history is an crappy one. He along with his two brothers, were doted on by their parents. Until one day at 6 months old they picked them up and chucked them out of the door, with a simple goodbye. It turns out that they were to make their own way in life from that day on. The brothers were undecided between each other about where to go, so Adriel ventured off to Mexico and Christian left for Hawaii. Mathias wandered about for a bit, before deciding on Canada, his father's country.

Changes-

He shall venture to inferni and he will gain many negative views on wolves. And will probably try and lie and say he has no wolf blood when he actually does. He will also try and latch onto another member for support.


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