I <3 your writing style. Melee is adorable.
Melee made up for what Bindu lacked in her exhaustion, piping up to point out a rabbit. Dark eyes fumbled for a second but located it, sitting serenely, like a little statue in the coldness. The girl almost laughed to herself. She didn't understand how this prey, so small and weak, could sit in the open when there were bushes and other forms of cover all around it- but she was grateful. Though she wouldn't admit it to Melee, the teen was not a very good huntress and probably couldn't have found -nonetheless catch- any food in thicker parts of the forest.
Her senses turned sharp like a knife; her slim figure pressed against the frozen ground, poised for the hunt. Making no sound, the girl closed the gap between hunter and prey, every muscle intent on success. An ear twitched. It was almost too easy. Before the rabbit had a chance to leap away, Bindu plucked it off of the ground and ended its life in a mercifully quick squeeze. She felt a little dizzy- probably because of fatigue- but she straightened up and deliberately walked back to where Melee was huddled, rabbit in her jaws.
Melee's aid in the hunt made Bindu look down at her with admiration in her doe eyes. The child's acute senses were humbling, because the girl knew that on her own she simply wouldn't have detected the bunny. It was Melee's keen awareness that killed the prey; the pup, though little, deserved it the most. Bindu's jaws parted in the slightest and a bundle of warm fur dropped to the ground at the little one's paws. Dots of red were beginning to stain its gray-and-white pelt. "Go ahead," she urged with a smile, and sat down to rest in the bitter cold.
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