Futoji (critique him!)

[Ookami]

I fixed everything up.! How's this?

Apperance-

Futoji has bright blue eyes and a white face. He has a black line that comes down in between his eyes from a surrouding black frame of his face that consits of his ears as well. He has black mixed with a little brown fur from the middle of his neck down to the tip of his tail. The 'overcoat' reaches down to his stomach. His underbelly is a creamy-white color. The same color covers his legs and comes up from his stomach, in between his legs and onto his chest.

Biography-

He broke his left front leg which now walks with a limp forever and gave him a big scar that has faded but is still very noticable. The limp greatly affected Futoji's quickness and swiftness so his parents knocked his rank down to Omega. Even as an Omega Futoji trained himself, he worked with the limp instead of against it, so now the limp only affects his swiftness and quickness a little bit. His parents were unaware of his self-training however, so his rank was not raised.

At 7 months old Futoji left the pack. About a month later his pack was raided by the same wolf's pack that had met Futoji at the lagoon. The wolf was searching for Futoji, but finding out he was gone made him angry. He attacked his brother who barely managed to get away, his brother's whereabouts are now unknown. Futoji didn't know though about the raid of his pack and continued living by himself for over a year.