07-23-2011, 08:50 AM
apologies for wait but this is better than what I had at first
3+
Above them, high in the sky heavy clouds began to roll in from the ocean side of the pack, blown in by fast winds and a cold front moving towards the land and dragging with it a large load of water that had recently been evaporated from the sea. In the distance cold met warm and a low rumbling thunder had her ears twisting towards the sound. Her fur puffed itself up in anticipation of having to fend off freezing rain and keep her inner fur and skin dry and thus warm. A gusty breeze tugged at her mane, the long strands dancing in the air a though pleased by the weather. Jace's body did all this automatically in response to changes in the air it could sense but her attention was firmly captured by the black man before her, a slight smile on her face.
She listened intently as he told her about the place he had found with pride and also shame welling up quietly inside of her. While she had been moping about and generally being useless and selfish he had thought ahead, using his initiative to produce something worthy of a mate. She should have also been busy at work, helping the others complete their move and collecting stuff she and Temo would also need, the shame of this had her tail laying flat against her legs. Jace's eyes finally remove themselves from him to look about the place she must call home now with critical gaze, if she was going to live here then she would make a proper go of it rather than the half arsed attitude she had been displaying lately.
"Yes I would like to see it, could we go now?" Some of her old enthusiasm was leeching back into her voice, now she had made the conscious decision to join in she was genuinely excited
3+
Above them, high in the sky heavy clouds began to roll in from the ocean side of the pack, blown in by fast winds and a cold front moving towards the land and dragging with it a large load of water that had recently been evaporated from the sea. In the distance cold met warm and a low rumbling thunder had her ears twisting towards the sound. Her fur puffed itself up in anticipation of having to fend off freezing rain and keep her inner fur and skin dry and thus warm. A gusty breeze tugged at her mane, the long strands dancing in the air a though pleased by the weather. Jace's body did all this automatically in response to changes in the air it could sense but her attention was firmly captured by the black man before her, a slight smile on her face.
She listened intently as he told her about the place he had found with pride and also shame welling up quietly inside of her. While she had been moping about and generally being useless and selfish he had thought ahead, using his initiative to produce something worthy of a mate. She should have also been busy at work, helping the others complete their move and collecting stuff she and Temo would also need, the shame of this had her tail laying flat against her legs. Jace's eyes finally remove themselves from him to look about the place she must call home now with critical gaze, if she was going to live here then she would make a proper go of it rather than the half arsed attitude she had been displaying lately.
"Yes I would like to see it, could we go now?" Some of her old enthusiasm was leeching back into her voice, now she had made the conscious decision to join in she was genuinely excited