A little critique, mentors?
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Your history seems to be very thorough to me. I'm thinking, however, that the wound might have to be more serious than implied for there to be a realistic amount of the virus to infect the body (and someone correct me if I'm wrong). If the wolf was able to just get up and grumble and walk away, I'm not sure if there would be enough, to make him change into a luperci ^=^;, since a lot of fluids need to be exchanged.

Also, and this is probably just a personal curiosity, but what was the thick cloudy liquid that made his fur white?


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