07-16-2009, 01:32 AM
Perfect! I've read a lot of your posts and I just love your writing. Here are a couple I just took randomly from two of the threads I'm in:
Quote:Jezebel had started to get the hang of clan life quite easily, settling herself amongst the caves by the coast. She had already met a couple other members of Inferni; Ryan whom she had easily gotten along with, and an eccentric girl named Zana. Yet she had still not seen Gabriel since joining, and though they had caught up on much since they had last known each other in the South during their youth, the ashen woman still wanted to know more.
Jezebel set out in lupus form, her fur soft and flowing, it's dark tones blending amongst the tree cast shadows with flashes of the white upon her chest, lower face and inner ears. Her ruby eyes sparkled with the excitement of the run as she sped through the forest of Inferni looking for Gabriel's distinct, and musky scent. She found it everywhere, along each blade of grass and the bark of the trees. She tried to keep track of his freshest scent, wandering towards its source, back towards the caves. The woman slowed to a stop, bones reforming and sinews snapping as her limbs stretched and her form took on more humanoid qualities, until finally she stood straight and shook her dark, wavy hair from her red eyes.
Looking about curiously the curvaceous woman walked slowly froward, scenting the air briefly before pausing and letting loose a low howl for Gabriel, hugging her arms as a light breeze tickled at her shortened fur, her tail starting a slow and rhythmic sway as she awaited for her old friend to answer with a smile in place.
Quote:Jezebel had been a part of Inferni now for a couple of weeks and had already easily fallen back into the routine of clan life; a life she had not experienced since she was a yearling, fighting wolves alongside her passion Gabriel and friend Eli. Now she was living it up, falling back into her friendship with Gabriel with ease, a bond which had never left the two in their years apart, and starting her new life amongst the caverns of Inferni. Yet Jezebel knew of course she would not be able to appreciate her new home fully if she left every corner unexplored, so she had set out to explore the eastern area of the clans territory.
Her path eventually led her to a man made building, something she had not seen in quite a while, and she made her away around the mansion with interest. Jezebel breathed in the scents surrounding her, her ears twitching as she sorted through each, deeming what was relevant or not. It was with her next breath that she caught the scent of wolves and clan, her hackles instantly standing at attention, Jezebel crouching close to the ground as she neared another corner of the large house. It was then she picked up the sounds of voices, both female and derisive.
What wolf would be delusional enough to pass such a clear and gruesomely marked border? Peering around the corner the ash and white woman looked upon the scene through a curtain of her dark and wavy hair, the sight of two coyotes, not one, catching her off guard. Straightening her posture Jezebel made herself known to the two others by walking out into the open, looking first towards the woman who was clearly part of the clan, thought not known to Jezebel, then to the coyote-hybrid with the beginnings of a glare as her ears swiveled back.
“And you are?” Jezebel asked the strange girl, letting her lips slip past the tips of her fangs in silent warning, her red gaze flicking towards the older woman in the same questioning--yet not so hostile--gaze.