07-16-2009, 02:24 PM
[html]Thank you.
And yeah, I did edit it late last night, trying to cover a bit more and taking out a bit. I ended up deciding that it wouldn't be bleach, considering that it might've affected his wounds too severely to recover. Bleach on an open, bleeding wound. . . not good.
I think it's official now. I don't have too much that I plan on changing.
And I usually don't do first person. But I just felt like it at the time, especially considering how he told it. Since he actually did 'tell the story'. Not that it's being told. Once I have a profile table and post log, I'm going to post his profile. I'm trying to make one off of a template, and I'm trying not to screw it up. XD [/html]
And yeah, I did edit it late last night, trying to cover a bit more and taking out a bit. I ended up deciding that it wouldn't be bleach, considering that it might've affected his wounds too severely to recover. Bleach on an open, bleeding wound. . . not good.
I think it's official now. I don't have too much that I plan on changing.
And I usually don't do first person. But I just felt like it at the time, especially considering how he told it. Since he actually did 'tell the story'. Not that it's being told. Once I have a profile table and post log, I'm going to post his profile. I'm trying to make one off of a template, and I'm trying not to screw it up. XD
Thanks for the input, guys. ^^