06-10-2010, 10:07 PM
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Your post was fine I don't mind the slight PP. words
Amaranth was let staring into the eyes of the man who would most likely end her life. She as filled with worry over weither or not she would live but deep down she had the feeling she would. After all how many lived after the great Haku Soul held them as a pup over a roaring fire. She was in a way confident that she would live but she always had to think what it.
Amaranth was let staring into the eyes of the man who would most likely end her life. She as filled with worry over weither or not she would live but deep down she had the feeling she would. After all how many lived after the great Haku Soul held them as a pup over a roaring fire. She was in a way confident that she would live but she always had to think what it.
She could feel the heat of his breath on her and now the longer he stayed there the more she worried. She listened to the little he had to say. She was not worthy of what? His teaching? Of knowing why he spared her? What was she not worthy for? She did not know she just simply stayed quiet.
She was so uncertain about what he would do and then he moved his movement startling her slightly as he rather lightly nicked her face. The scrape didn't really hurt nor did it bleed heavy but she could feel the blood moving. The her shoulder what was he doing. And why had she stopped trying to fight him off? He licked her cheek where he had nicked her. What was he going to do with her let her go or eat her?
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