07-16-2009, 01:25 AM
I was just wondering if a mentor, or anyone really, could give some feedback on the structure, grammar and overall creativity of my writing. I would really love to improve and to make my characters more dynamic. Just whoever gets to this first let me know if you want me to quote any posts I've made of Jezebel, though I also have a Post Log going in my profile if you don't mind/have the time to look yourself. Thank-you! 