The Undertaker
#1
Name: What he goes by: The Undertaker Real Name: Black Death Raltigo Nickname: Cheshire

Gender: Male

Age: Four years Old

Birthdate: Unknown

Appearance:

Lupus: Around the weight of 127 pounds, and a good height around 34". Undertaker truly looks very much like... well, an undertaker, even in lupus form. Long silver hair, the goes down to the back of his back, close to his bottom, with a few braids here and there, and long bangs that completely cover both eyes, it's hard to understand how he can see. Well, he can't see well, bangs pushed away and bangs in the same place. He often runs into trees, into houses, trips over animals, trips over flat ground, and mostly runs into others. A pure blood gray wolf, Undertaker is large and swift, but tries to keep himself skinny, so he will have great swiftness. He does have muscle on him, just enough to knock someone over. A base coat of light silver, that covers his whole body, has also been covered up by other markings. His chest and stomach is a fine, pure white. This pure white is also on the inside of his ears, and around his mouth, that runs up almost to his eyes. His eyes, what unusual things. The left one is a greenish yellow, very bright. The other is a vibrant crimson, the color of blood, although, these are rarely seen, of course. On his ears, the tips are dark brownish black, but only one has this tip. He is missing his other ear. It looks to be completely ripped off, so you always have to talk to him in his right ear. Moving down close to his nose, a rectangle shaped marking that travels from his nose to close to his eyes, and this marking is a dark, sooty gray. Also, around his eyes, just under both of them, there is a horizontal scar that runs completely around his whole head, connected. This scar has been stitched up sloppily, so it gives him quite... an evil look. Yet, you don't see much of this scar, only the bottom a bit. Once you move down to his neck, there is another sloppily stitched scar, that goes completely around his neck, another circle. Once you move down to his legs, they are a dark brown, that is slightly black, and it coats his whole legs, from his shoulder to his toes. Although, his toes are a light gray, and he has oddly long claws. Once you move to his back legs, they are a bit different. They are a dark brownish black, he dyed them slightly darker, and there are even dark rings around his back legs, obviously dyed, There are three rings on each back leg. Moving to his tail, it is quite long. The end of the tail is a dark gray, almost black. And, for the final part, moving to his back, there is a blob, I guess you could say, of reddish gray.
Secui: Not much different then his Lupus form, but his bangs get a bit long and so does his long hair. In Secui, Undertaker weighs around 178, and is about 43".
Optime: When in Optime, Undertaker weighs around 274 pounds, and is about 8'0" feet high. Undertaker's silver hair runs to his bottom, with exactly three braids in his hair. His bangs are still over his eyes, and he is often wearing an odd hat, that is certainly weird looking. He owns an incredibly large cloak, that drags against the ground, and goes over his hands. Under the cloak, there is simple dress up black pants, and an undershirt, sometimes a simple gray coat. He often has all sorts of things in his pockets of the cloak, which are quite large, from biscuits, to all sorts of various weapons.
Other: In each ear, there are three earrings, his nose has a golden ring through it. Above each eye, his eyebrow's are pierced. His left part of his lip is also pierced, along with his tongue.

Skills:
Undertaker has many skills. He is mostly an Metalworker and a woodworker, and... well... an undertaker. He has the skills to "make the dead's spirit's go onto the next world." Plus, he can make pretty good coffin, or he could just burn the body for you. But, before he sends the body into the ground or into ashes, he always studies them, the way they were killed and such. He likes to help people with the things he loves, so, he loves studying dead bodies, he loves making things from wood, and making things from various metals. He also knows how to speak Italian, Spanish, and Japanese, and is a quite good teacher to pups, if they don't get freaked out by him. Also, Undertaker is a quite good assasain, one of silence and shadows. If you need someone properly killed, and want them buried quickly, Undertaker's the one you need.

Weaknesses: Now, The Undertaker has quite a few weaknesses. He is is very possessive of his things, and often doesn't like to trade things, and he is quite possessive of friends and such, if he ever gets any. He can get incredibly jealous, an example of that is when he killed Innocent Blade and Silent Space, if he couldn't have her, no one could. He is also missing one of his ears, so he is hard in hearing in one of them, you always have to talk to him in the other. He is also obsessive with his Cheshire mask, Panda, his robe and hat, and some people that he will one day hold close to him. Undertaker also happens to be very superstitious, he believes that if a dead body isn't properly buried, and if the soul isn't sent through to the next world, they will haunt him, which also produces bad dreams where he attempts to kill others.

Alignment: Neutral

Biography: Black Death (The Undertaker's name as a child) actually had a normal upbring, yet, he can't remember exactly when he was born. He was born in quite a religious pack of England, but it never caught on for him, yet, for burial sessions, he had to learn prayers for the departing soul. Even when he was younger, he was fascinated with dead bodies, and the way they were killed. When he was younger, just around five months, he would venture from his mother, and watch The Current Undertaker, who's name was "Brutal Scar Libro", but was called, "The Scar Undertaker." In Black Death's pack, Undertaking was a royal job, sending other's beloved to the other world, you had to have wits and intelligence, but also sanity. Many could go insane from seeing so much blood and gore, death and horror. Even Black Death has gone slightly insane from this job. Brutal Scar happened to like Black Death a lot, and wished for the young boy to take over the job of Undertaking. He taught him everything, how to take out the brain, etc. He also taught him how to give all the livings love to the dead. How to make the dead feel the love, through the coffin, through the flowers, through the tears.

Black Death, now one year of age, would finally get his job. He was lined up with all the other one year olds. He was excited, scarless, cloakless, and hatless. He waited for his name to be called, so he could finally become The Undertaker. Brutal Scar was old, and very much insane now, and he now lived alone. Black death was the second to the last, and soon, his name was called. The alpha was talking, blah blah, and soon, he said that Black Death was to be... The Metalworker and Woodworker. Black Death was surprised, and disappointed, don't forget mad as hell. He earned himself a work belt. Yay. The boy after him, named "Innocent Blade Tether" Had become The Undertaker. Innocent Blade earned his new name, which was " The Blade Undertaker." Black Death despised the boy, and instead of earning the name that he deserved, "The Death Undertaker," He earned the name "Death Woodworker."

Black Death, now two years, earned his first mate, a beautiful girl named "Silent Space Goera." She was a beautiful black and white female, with dark green eyes with flecks of orange. He loved her dearly, but she was a cruel girl, always refused Black Death's love, and always put him down. Black Death didn't exactly care, he was smitten to his first love. Many females didn't like the odd male, the male who was always fascinated with blood and gore, death and tears. Silent Space could only tolerate him, and was absolutely disgusted when she was chosen to be the brute's mate. Black Death cared for her though, always making her necklaces and pretty things, but that soon came to a crashing end. One day, Black Death had been wandering through the nearby woods, and discovered that Silent Space was cheating on him. With The Blade Undertaker.

Black Death was infuriated. He was locked in his room for days, but for a good reason. He was plotting a killing. When Black Death was younger, besides being trained as a woodworker, metalworker, and undertaker, he had also been trained as an assassin, by a visitor to the pack when he was younger. This male had given him knives and such. Black Death was plotting to kill both Silent Space and The Blade Undertaker. It was a win win, the terrible girl who had played with his heart and possibly others, would be slain, and the terrible undertaker would be undertaken. He plotted, and he soon came with a good plan. He was find the next time the would meet for one of their sessions in the forest, and kill them both.

Black Death put this plan into action once he was exactly three. He killed them the night after his birthday. It was simple, no screams, but much pain for them. The next morning, no trace of them. Black Death had made coffins seven months ago, and buried them, and collected their insides, and let them be buried separately. This plan was good, due to it had been raining the whole week, so he predicted that it would rain that night to wash away the blood. And it did. The only thing he kept were their hearts, their dead hearts. He kept them has prizes. Black Death would have to wait for the next one year old ceremony, which was long away.

Black Death, now Three and a half, had yet another mate. They never mated, but this one truly seemed to love him. Her name was "Gentle Wind," and her name fit her. The gentle and kind girl was a fresh breeze to Undertaker. She was polite, and Black Death truly started to love her. But he soon got nightmares. Terrible nightmares, zombies, gore, death. So much tears. He would often sleep walk, and attack randomly, looking insane and incredibly dangerous, because he was when he was like that. He attacked many without knowing, and often killed them. The next morning, he would wake up next to a dead body. He didn't understand, so he simply buried them, and kept their hearts. He soon had many, but he was now truly, slightly insane. He hated what he was doing, but he couldn't stop his dreams.

One day, when Black Death and Gentle Wind were truly mates, he told her about the dreams. She was truly frightened, but she would help him through it. He then revealed his other secret. His Hearts. She was truly terrified, and called him a bloodthirsty monster, a demon. He didn't understand her reaction, and he soon decided maybe explaining more would help. So, he locked the doors. She called him a murder, satin, and many other cruel names. He told her the story about the old undertaker, and about how he killed his old mate for cheating. Gentle wind was scared out of her mind, and soon, to get rid of the terrible feeling that this man before her was going to do something terrible to her, she pulled out a knife, and simply killed herself. Black Death was there, and watched as the life got sucked out of her.

He took the knife from her hand, and began to weep. His eyes were wide, giving him a crazy look. You see, when he was younger, he used to cut his bangs. Now, back to the story. The alpha busted in, because he heard Gentle Winds scream when she killed herself. He saw the knife, and instantly understood. The took Gentle Wind's body away, and took Black Death away to question him. He told them everything with a slightly insane crooked grin on his face, even though that was his usual one. The were disgusted, and soon, exiled him, but first, they did something.

The made Black Death the undertaker for exactly seven minutes. The others booed, and threw things as he was tied up. He had the Undertaker's long, black, huge cloak on, and the undertakers odd hat on. He was grinning, tied up, as if he liked it. They made him the undertaker, and his name was "The Death Undertaker." But soon, He simply frowned, and said in a wavy, odd voice, "No, Nooooo.... I ammmmm... Simpppllllyyyyy, "TTTHHHHEEE UUNNNNNDDDDEERRRTAAKKKERRR." And so, with those words, he jumped from the makeshift stage, and used his hand, which was pushed against his side, use his sharp nails, and began to cut at the ropes while he jumped, ran, and kicked. Everyone scrambled after the swift undertaker, but no one could catch him. He cut the ropes just enough with his unusually long nails, and was able to reach into his woodworker's and ironworker's belt, and pull out a secret knife, and slash through the others. It was here, where he earned the scars, and the missing ear.

Black Death began to fight with the Alpha, no others would intrude. And, what do you know? His father was the alpha! His father was a skilled fighter, and attacked with great swiftness, yet, he had no strength. Black Death had some of both. He attacked at his father, jumped swiftly when needed, dodging into shadows. He cut out one of his father's eyes, and ripped of his tail. But Black Death didn't go unscarred. His left ear got ripped off, and he got a long scar that circled his whole head just below his eyes, and a long, circle scar that went around his neck. If his father went deeper where his neck scar was, he would have died. Black Death escaped, but threw a few knives at his father while at it. Black Death ran from the pack, and he was no long Black Death, no, He was The Undertaker.

Undertaker now Four, escaped from England, on a small boat, and traveled to the United State. He was first in Florida, where he stayed for awhile, in a pack, as an Undertaker. That's where he got his horse from a friend, and he instantly named it Panda for no reason, He soon left through, he didn't want his dreams to come back, although, he hadn't had any in forever. He soon began to travel up, to New York. He stayed with a few other loners for awhile, and got a cheshire cat mask from one of the friends, which he now holds dearly to him, and he soon learned of Nova Scotia, a pleasant place with pleasant packs and different breeds. Maybe some would accept him there. Undertaker soon arrived at Nova Scotia, and at the moment, he is staying in Halifax.
(( ^ Very long O.O))

Personality: Slight Insane. Likes pain. Fairly Kind. Intelligent. That basically spells him out, he is pretty darn friendly at times, although, very creepy most the time. He likes pain, in you made him roll around in salt, he would laugh while doing it, and lick up the salt at the same time. He is slightly insane, due to his job, but will often jump out of no where, and be pretty funny. He is pretty unusual, his favorite colors are black, gray, and red, but he will let you dress him up in pink. Although, He too, has a dark side. He can act serious, and even use a serious voice at times, due to his job.
((Short, will make longer when I make him.))

Inventory:
Undertaker's cloak and hat, without shoes.
His "throwing" knives, really are kitchen knives.
Katakana
Woodworking tools
His horsey, Panda.
His Cheshire Cat Mask, which he calls "Masky."
Hair
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SO..... how is he?
#2
You have an epic character here ^^ I just have one issue that I think needs to be brought up. It seems to me that The Undertaker has just so many pros and very little cons. Maybe you should even him out a bit more. He has strength, speed, and intelligence, he seems a bit overpowered to me :\ you could try giving him some more weaknesses. While I'm sure there are plenty of very intelligent insane people out there, maybe you could give him a mental disability that would help even out his strengths and weaknesses, or perhaps you could give him more severe physical injuries, such as broken bones that healed but cause him pain or something that would slow him down a bit. If you don't like these ideas, then you can visit this site for a very awesome list of weaknesses you could add to him. However, I don't mean to be rude, but having a character that is strong, fast, smart, and an assassin is a bit too much IMO.

Hope this helped ^^
#3
Thanks for pointing that out, Kemo! I knew I forgot something xD
I did add a few, I can't wait until I get him. Any other things I need to fix?
#4
Well everything looks good but I still think he needs to focus on one aspect. All of his weaknesses are fine but he can't necessarily be fast and strong and intelligent and an assassin. He could be a fast, intelligent assassin who isn't strong but makes up for that in speed and silence, or a fast intelligent, or a strong guy who's not so fast but is intelligent. You get the idea right? I'm just concerned that your charrie is uber despite his weaknesses. Other than that, everything looks good to go ^^ Feel free to get a second opinion as well, I'm kinda new at this lol but eager to help Smile


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