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		Thread: Mentors Post: Sorry, we didn't see that! :) Taking care of it no... Sorry, we didn't see that! :) Taking care of it now. Thank you!	'Souls Mentors	Dead Questions & Help	1	658	08-14-2011, 10:44 AM
		Thread: German Loner Post: [i]ooc: I think the story is well written, but rem... ooc: I think the story is well written, but remember that Luperci aren't advanced enough in technology yet to have electricity or heaters; it's 30 years after the apocalypse, so most electronics would...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	2	790	07-06-2011, 10:21 AM
		Thread: In a forest Post: So sorry for the wait! I notice you are often usi... So sorry for the wait! I notice you are often using "he" and "he's" in place of the proper word, "his". When you say "his", you are implying something that belongs to him (Raymo); i.e. his eyes, his ...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	4	1,406	06-08-2011, 09:18 PM
		Thread: In a forest Post: Hey Vincent! :) Your writing is starting to get be... Hey Vincent! :) Your writing is starting to get better! You still have some common, general errors that need a bit of work, though. Here is a useful page for learning the differences between "to", "t...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	4	1,406	05-31-2011, 01:28 PM
		Thread: This Ain't No Fairytale Post: [b]OOC:[/b]<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:... OOC: Something you mentioned in your PM was that Juno was taken as a mate by force. This would imply Victor is not entirely a good person, and judging by Juno's initial reactions -- ears back, no prot...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	1	760	05-26-2011, 11:06 PM
		Thread: Getting used to it Post: The length of this post is pretty good -- well don... The length of this post is pretty good -- well done! It's still a little on the short side compared to many other posts, but that's okay for now. We'd like it if you tried to write a little longer eac...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	2	1,106	05-21-2011, 04:06 PM
		Thread: Shelter from the Storm Post: [html]<div style="font-family:georgia; serif; widt... [html]OOC: Your most recent post looks wonderful! Thank you for taking into account what we've told you. :3 We'd just like to see one more post from you here, and you should be all set for acceptance ...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	4	1,534	05-21-2011, 03:10 AM
		Thread: "Fake Post" Post: [html]<div style="font-family:georgia; serif; widt... [html]OOC: My turn for a late one. ;_; You can totally start your real roleplaying threads, too -- I would suggest doing that ASAP! :3 You can have as many threads as you want, you needn't wait for ou...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	11	2,279	05-21-2011, 01:41 AM
		Thread: "Fake Post" Post: [b]OOC:[/b] Aww, no! The admins are usually lenien... OOC: Aww, no! The admins are usually lenient as long as your writing is coherent (which yours certainly is) and I think perhaps you just got a bit swept up in the shuffle. :3 All of the joining proced...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	11	2,279	05-04-2011, 01:45 AM
		Thread: Shelter from the Storm Post: [b]OOC:[/b] Not a problem, Ana! I'm glad to get yo... OOC: Not a problem, Ana! I'm glad to get your reply :) However, there are a few little details that you could probably work on in your next one, if that's alright. I loved reading your post, but ther...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	4	1,534	05-03-2011, 11:48 PM
		Thread: "Fake Post" Post: [b]OOC:[/b] Yep! Everything in your most recent p... OOC: Yep! Everything in your most recent post looks great -- whenever you're ready to wrap this up, let us know! Thanks for working with us again -- your receptiveness to critique and willingness to ...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	11	2,279	04-27-2011, 11:35 PM
		Thread: Shelter from the Storm Post: [b]OOC:[/b] For <a href='http://www.soulsrpg.com/... OOC: For Aurora Etoiles. :3 There's a little bit of character information about Enlil in this account's profile -- please excuse the clutter, as we're still setting up the Mentors program to some ext...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	4	1,534	04-27-2011, 11:03 PM
		Thread: "Fake Post" Post: [b]OOC:[/b] It's pretty important for you to mak... OOC: It's pretty important for you to make sure you're patient when roleplaying. :3 I know this is your only thread right now, but partners in roleplay can't always reply, and there are some days wh...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	11	2,279	04-26-2011, 07:43 AM
		Thread: "Fake Post" Post: [i]ooc: here you go![/i] He had been traveling a ... ooc: here you go! He had been traveling a while now, and his paw pads hurt from the walking. The plain Eastern Timberwolf had been trudging along for almost a full day now - he had left his old pack...	'Souls Mentors	Dead LASKY	11	2,279	04-24-2011, 07:24 PM